G-Break Posted December 22, 2009 Report Share Posted December 22, 2009 this is my new card..i guess it's a good start..[spoiler=New Cards] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Breakaway Posted December 22, 2009 Report Share Posted December 22, 2009 Well i can't pronounce the name but its Bland its effect is verry bland lol. OCG - When this card is destroyed by a card effect, draw a card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Avatar12 Posted December 22, 2009 Report Share Posted December 22, 2009 Weird name... o_oEffect is unoriginal, and I wouldn`t say it`s very usable...Amazing pic. Don`t see why it`s a Tuner, though >.> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
G-Break Posted December 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 22, 2009 well.. the name is for my set name.. "Citl" setlol.. and.. mind to correct that? or correct anything on that card.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Breakaway Posted December 22, 2009 Report Share Posted December 22, 2009 OCG - When this card is destroyed by a card effect, draw a card. This is what should be the effect okay Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DMZ Posted December 22, 2009 Report Share Posted December 22, 2009 Well, it ain't a tuner, that's fo sho.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Breakaway Posted December 22, 2009 Report Share Posted December 22, 2009 OKay for second one First go to the first post you made and somwere bellow it there should be [Edit] so click it and post your card there. OCG - Select one monster you control to have this card attack twice during the same battle phase. The selected monster cannot declare an attack this turn. Once again its Bland but it works for a New Member such as yourself keep at it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
G-Break Posted December 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 22, 2009 well.. i'm indonesian.. so my english isn't so good.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Breakaway Posted December 22, 2009 Report Share Posted December 22, 2009 Lol its fine you'll lern the ways of OCG soon. It took me some time too lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
G-Break Posted December 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 22, 2009 thx a lot.. well, i have many created card before i joined YCM.. lol..and that's all need correction.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Breakaway Posted December 22, 2009 Report Share Posted December 22, 2009 Umm im not sure what you want by the last one but here's what i got OCG - This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by tributing 3 monsters you control. Once per turn, you can select 1 Continous Spell card from your Graveyard and add it to your hand. IS this good? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
G-Break Posted December 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 22, 2009 the last card is can only Tribute summoned by tributing 3 monster you control. and cannot be special summoned. :Di think, when i write the effects for cards, always think Drawback.. :D(drawback for adding 1 spell from graveyard is showing continuous spell from hand) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Breakaway Posted December 22, 2009 Report Share Posted December 22, 2009 Oh but on the card you said add that card to your hand lol okay but i got ya hows this OCG - This card cannot be Special Summond. This card can only be Tribute Summoned by Tributing 3 monsters you control. Once per turn, by revealing 1 Continous Spell card you can add 1 Spell card from your Graveyard to your hand. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
G-Break Posted December 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 22, 2009 YES! LOLso hard to make word like that.. LOL :Di'll fix it.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Breakaway Posted December 22, 2009 Report Share Posted December 22, 2009 No problem Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 22, 2009 Report Share Posted December 22, 2009 1st card effect is too boring, add another effect to it that goes the same with Gettam, for having only 1 effect on the field there's obviously the OCG errors, use the OCG thread to help you on that 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
G-Break Posted December 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2009 what about Spirit Card for my 1st card.so it can back to my hand at end phase. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rehva Posted December 23, 2009 Report Share Posted December 23, 2009 :] Overused Pics 1st card's Effect is too Simple :[ 5/10 2st Card looks Ok and Balanced 7/10 :] 3rd Card just pwns the rest Lol 8/10 xP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuri Posted December 23, 2009 Report Share Posted December 23, 2009 8/10 for now ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
G-Break Posted December 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2009 added new supportive card. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 23, 2009 Report Share Posted December 23, 2009 the 2nd sentence is weird. You should have said As long as this card remains face up on the field, once per turn you must reveal one Warrior or Beast-Warrior type monster in your hand to your opponent. If you do not, destroy one Warrior or Beast-Warrior type monster on your side of the field. In which case you need to add an alternative effect: in case you don't reveal a warrior or beast warrior type to your opponent, and there's no warrior or beast warrior type monsters on the field to destroy 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wes16 Posted December 23, 2009 Report Share Posted December 23, 2009 bad OCG OCG: 1/4Pic: 1/1effect: .5/1OP'ed UP'd: 3.5/4Overall 6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
G-Break Posted December 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 24, 2009 well.. my english is bad, because i'm still study.. thanks for comment.. ^^ *added new cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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