Rprshadow Posted December 11, 2007 Report Share Posted December 11, 2007 well as with all my cards i tried to balence this one but im not sure if it is ballenced, ratings please? Since it's become a big issue i'll just write my response here for everyone to see.I put these cards in the realistic cards section because these arn't just a bunch of pictures i threw together in 5 mins with random text. i put alot of time into this set to make it as realistic as i can,dispite crowd, please consider that im trying to make an actual set here, the fact that i've only been making cards for 2 days now. so before you say they should be in pop culture again and join the the mortal kombat theme is just a gimmic to 1 make them more familiar and 2 to make them a set everyone can look at and hopfuly say "yeah i can see him with that effect", much like i have... thank you for reading this. I've redone all of my previous cards and added new ones Enjoy...and there are probably more ont he way still also i recently found out the real species that reptile falls under, and updated him as such. Updates:12-13-07: shang tsung has been re-done12-13-07: Bakara has been added Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VainZiler Posted December 11, 2007 Report Share Posted December 11, 2007 Well done, I must say these are an improvement to your past cards. Just some CG work to clean up on though: Sub-Zero: opponent's needs an ' (Normal grammar thing, used to show possession), should be "add 1 Ice Counter" (Unsure if it needs " " around Ice Counter, been awhile since I did a counter card), Tribute needs to be capitalized, and Draw Phase needs to be capitalized. Reptile: The only error off the top of my head is face-down needs the - between face and down. Scorpion: opponent's needs an ', Graveyard needs to be capitalized, and other then that, I see nothing wrong. Raiden: Very good. Now, aside from Yugioh stuff, just as an MK thing; Sub-Zero: It's spelt Lin Kuei Reptile: Reptile isn't a real ninja; he is stealthy, but not really a ninja. (Among all of the 'ninjas' in Mortal Kombat, Scorpion is the only real ninja, well, when he was alive he was) so perhaps just as an MK thing, it'd make more sense if you just put his race down, Zaterrian. Scorpion: Hell Ninja doesn't really fit, as there is no hell in MK, there's the Netherworld, where Scorpion resides, but that's about it. However, Ninja Specter, would fit nicely. Raiden: In terms of thunder vs lightning, you'd be correct. But Raiden is the Thunder God, not lightning (Yet he uses lightning, go figure). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Santiduelist Posted December 11, 2007 Report Share Posted December 11, 2007 these card dont go in this section, other than that not bad, some wording errors and maybe they could be better but either way good work 7/10 keep em coming Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VainZiler Posted December 11, 2007 Report Share Posted December 11, 2007 They can be posted here, the main point of this section is simply to make realistic style cards, wether from pop-culture or not. Pop culture, is just simply any type of card, realistic or not, and any other cards, is like what I call, the bucket of overpowered and joke cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted December 12, 2007 Report Share Posted December 12, 2007 hese card dont go in this section, other than that not bad, some wording errors and maybe they could be better but either way good work 7/10 keep em coming Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rprshadow Posted December 12, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 12, 2007 the reason i choose to post my cards in this section is because i aim to make ballenced and realistic cards, as long as i do that i don't really think it matters what kind of pictures or characters i use does it? also i would like my cards to be taken seriously as far as being critisized goes, instead of all my work being writen off as "more anime and game crap". also i think especialy these card designs are ......well most of them are realistic. Also thanks for the advice vain ill have to go back and alter each of them when i get a chance...after that i think i'll try sector or sombody to that effect. also raiden was incredibly hard for me to make since i basicly detest normal monsters, they're just so boring to me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted December 12, 2007 Report Share Posted December 12, 2007 You spelled "balanced" wrong in the thread name. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted December 12, 2007 Report Share Posted December 12, 2007 And Scorpion is broken-his secondary effect is better than his first! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rprshadow Posted December 12, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 12, 2007 And Scorpion is broken-his secondary effect is better than his first! How do you fingure discarding your entire hand to the graveyard and drawing 3 only cards is better than destroying an opponents monster? reguardless i wouldnt call it broken since it's in no way a gamewinner, not only that the 2nd effect can completely wreck your stratagy and the fact that you have no choice but to flip the coin makes it so you may have an unsable monster. he's also quite weak at current standards since usualy 1 tribute gets you atleast 2400 attack points. in my opinion scorpion has some lame attack points and an almost cyber jar-like effect since it can either hurt you alot or help you win. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
flyingdagger8 Posted December 12, 2007 Report Share Posted December 12, 2007 Raiden has Mortal combat written on the edge...there are some grammar mistakes and these cards should really go under pop culture. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Greek Prince Posted December 12, 2007 Report Share Posted December 12, 2007 Scorpion is overpowered, i'd probably rather get a tails then a head, since I can discard 1 card to draw 3? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted December 12, 2007 Report Share Posted December 12, 2007 I think you did a good job! 8.00000001 / 10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted December 12, 2007 Report Share Posted December 12, 2007 Scorpion is overpowered' date=' i'd probably rather get a tails then a head, since I can discard 1 card to draw 3?[/quote'] Thank you very much-that's exactly what I meant. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dannystfu9898 Posted December 13, 2007 Report Share Posted December 13, 2007 i think you did an okay job, 9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rprshadow Posted December 13, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 13, 2007 i think you did an okay job' date=' 9/10.[/quote'] thanks, somhow i don't think many other people agree but subzero is my favorate none the less. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted December 13, 2007 Report Share Posted December 13, 2007 i think you did an okay job' date=' 9/10.[/quote'] thanks, somhow i don't think many other people agree but subzero is my favorate none the less. hey i like the cards, there just in the wrong forum =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rprshadow Posted December 13, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 13, 2007 i think you did an okay job' date=' 9/10.[/quote'] thanks, somhow i don't think many other people agree but subzero is my favorate none the less. hey i like the cards, there just in the wrong forum =) please don't repeat the same post, it fithe thread with the same message from the same person and im sure we all know why that's somthing to avoid. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aztex Posted December 13, 2007 Report Share Posted December 13, 2007 Next time use img codes not attachments. Cool cards though they have some problems! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rprshadow Posted December 13, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 13, 2007 Next time use img codes not attachments. Cool cards though they have some problems! even still? like what? im not saying they're perfect, i would just like to know how i can fix them. (also i've been quite lazy lately so idk when the next one is coming....) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VainZiler Posted December 13, 2007 Report Share Posted December 13, 2007 Shang Tsung is horribly overpowered. Reduce the ammount increased from the effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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