L33t Jenkins Posted December 11, 2007 Report Share Posted December 11, 2007 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VainZiler Posted December 11, 2007 Report Share Posted December 11, 2007 Good card, minor mistakes: Normal Summoned needs to be capitalized, for regular grammar reasons, you might want to put a comma after Normal Summoned, you forgot the second " when quoting the card name, hand doesn't need to be capitalized, Deck needs to be capitalized. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Instinct Posted December 11, 2007 Report Share Posted December 11, 2007 pretty good cardsthere are a few mistakes in the effect stated above but still, pretty good! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted December 12, 2007 Report Share Posted December 12, 2007 um Normal Summoned needs to be capitalized, along with Deck, and you nee to put that second " next to the card name lol 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
flyingdagger8 Posted December 12, 2007 Report Share Posted December 12, 2007 HAHA. Few Grammar mistakes, but funny concept. I like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted December 12, 2007 Report Share Posted December 12, 2007 lol, jst like i though, Santa. lol, that jolly fat guy can't get away from the paparatsi(i know i didn't spell that right) can he? lol. anyway, just like what everybody else says, there are some problems, but it is the holidays, so lets leave it at 8/10Happy holidays! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted December 12, 2007 Report Share Posted December 12, 2007 Lol. I think its cool! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God GAK Posted December 12, 2007 Report Share Posted December 12, 2007 It is kewl. just capitalize "normal summoned" and "deck" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skyfi Posted December 12, 2007 Report Share Posted December 12, 2007 lol nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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