.Puppet Posted December 23, 2009 Report Share Posted December 23, 2009 First, I've read the OCG Thread, and the rules. I think I'm not breaking any of them here. My grammar isn't that bad, but if you guys find a flaw in my card, just say! I'll fix it as fast as I can :DAnyway, here is it. Don't be harsh, this is my first try! [spoiler=Name 1][spoiler=Name 1][spoiler=Name 2][spoiler=Name 2][spoiler=Effect Fixed][spoiler=Effect Fixed] Ok, I've added the counter limit. More rates, please ? Also, I tried to erase the logo. [spoiler=Effect Fixed²][spoiler=Effect Fixed²] [spoiler=Effect]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 2 monsters you control. Each time your opponent Summons a non-DARK monster, place 1 Darkness Counter on this card. You can Tribute this card with 5 Darkness Counters on it to Special Summon 1 DARK monster from your hand or Deck.[spoiler=Effect] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ΣДĢĪςίÅл Φƒ Đåŗķлꪪ Posted December 23, 2009 Report Share Posted December 23, 2009 love it is a perfect 9.9/10 you lost 0.1 poit becouse of the name. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Puppet Posted December 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2009 Really? Thanks a lot, man!Have you a suggest for the name? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rusty Shovel Posted December 23, 2009 Report Share Posted December 23, 2009 Pretty good. *Menacing stare* *Breaks out laughing* Good job :D 8.5/10 Though you could change the name. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Puppet Posted December 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2009 Thank you, desmonda, I'll change the name.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
◎Kaleidoscope Posted December 23, 2009 Report Share Posted December 23, 2009 I doubt this card would stay on the field long enough for the counter effect to activate. But for a 1st Card, really great job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Puppet Posted December 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2009 It has a pretty high ATK, I think it wouldn't be destroyed so hard o_oAnyway, thanks a lot for the comments, I've changed the name, what about now? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted December 23, 2009 Report Share Posted December 23, 2009 You could post the lore, it's easy to see and easy to correct OCGPIC is awsomeNice card overall9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Puppet Posted December 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2009 You mean I should post the effect?.. Ok, I'll.Thanks, anyway. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rusty Shovel Posted December 23, 2009 Report Share Posted December 23, 2009 Maybe you could make a card to go with this? Something to force your opponent to summon monsters at the cost of Life Points? ehh? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Puppet Posted December 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2009 That's a nice one =]Added Effect, for who can't read it. Anyone else? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
waterwhip Posted December 23, 2009 Report Share Posted December 23, 2009 Good card, awesome pic and effect. name needs tweeking 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Puppet Posted December 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2009 I've changed the name already! I'd like to know what is so bad with it :(Anyway, thanks a lot for commenting waterwhip. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twenty-five Zero Oh-oh Posted December 23, 2009 Report Share Posted December 23, 2009 I like name one better. IMO 2400 ATK is too low for 2 tributes. Other than that, it's a pretty cool card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Puppet Posted December 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2009 Depends of wich monsters you tribute.Thanks anyway. Any rate? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twenty-five Zero Oh-oh Posted December 23, 2009 Report Share Posted December 23, 2009 8/10I noticed, you may want to remove the logo in the bottom right of your picture. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Dark Megacyber Posted December 23, 2009 Report Share Posted December 23, 2009 The "Everytime" should be replaced with "When". That's the only error, together with the names. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Puppet Posted December 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2009 Hm... Everytime should be When?Thanks Dark Neoo.Thanks 2500st, too :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twenty-five Zero Oh-oh Posted December 23, 2009 Report Share Posted December 23, 2009 Actually it's "Each time your opponent". Source: Royal Magical Library Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Puppet Posted December 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2009 Actually I think that each time isn't correct, but thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twenty-five Zero Oh-oh Posted December 23, 2009 Report Share Posted December 23, 2009 http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Royal_Magical_Library Read this card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Puppet Posted December 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2009 Ok, I've fixed it.Thanks, 2500st. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 24, 2009 Report Share Posted December 24, 2009 the only thing you should add is a max counter limit given the effect is activated at 5, I'd say 5 is a good number for it 9.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Puppet Posted December 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 24, 2009 Ok, but why add a counter limit?Thanks anyway :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 24, 2009 Report Share Posted December 24, 2009 well tell me this, you going to create more cards that can also use the counters? if yes, then that's the reason Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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