thanonyx Posted December 23, 2009 Report Share Posted December 23, 2009 I am rather fond of LIGHT monsters. I have been planning to make a LIGHT deck for some time and then I wondered what kind of cards could make it better. So, with that in mind I made these. Lore:1 LIGHT Synchro Tuner + 1 or more LIGHT non-Tuner Synchro monstersWhile this card is face-up on the field the effects of all DARK monsters are negated. If this card destroys a non-LIGHT monster your opponent must discard 1 card for every 3 levels the destroyed monster has. If this card destroys a DARK monster inflict 1000 points of damage to your opponent. Please make sure to comment, rate, and berate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 24, 2009 Report Share Posted December 24, 2009 1st synchro is unimpressive also the first two need more than just one effect, they're UPed right now you misspelled "every" in the 3rd synchro 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thanonyx Posted December 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 24, 2009 1st synchro is unimpressive also the first two need more than just one effect' date=' they're UPed right now you misspelled "every" in the 3rd synchro 7/10[/quote'] I can fix that no prob. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ÐΛЯКЛΞSSКЛłGHТ Posted December 24, 2009 Report Share Posted December 24, 2009 1st pic is badAnyway other than that their nice7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thanonyx Posted December 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 24, 2009 1st pic is badAnyway other than that their nice7.5/10 I know the cupid pic isn't the best, but it's the best one I could find where he wasn't almost/completely naked. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 24, 2009 Report Share Posted December 24, 2009 1st synchro is unimpressive also the first two need more than just one effect' date=' they're UPed right now you misspelled "every" in the 3rd synchro 7/10[/quote'] I can fix that no prob. fine, but you still need to give the first two more effects Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted December 24, 2009 Report Share Posted December 24, 2009 Basdically, what has been said has been said. And the first one needs the border removed.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
◊ Hᵃᵏᵃˢᵉ ◊ Posted December 25, 2009 Report Share Posted December 25, 2009 That was a fairly unnecessary comment, and with no use in that, I feel you are kind of stuck up about your cards. Regardless that any cards coming out are OP'd, we appreciate balanced cards on this Forum. If you can't appreciate that, then we don't need you posting cards.Anywho, The cards are fairly simple, and I find nothing but a slight OP that wouldn't make much difference in a game. The cards have OCG Errors, but they're nothing to serious for correcting..... I give you about..... 8.5 altogether out of 10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thanonyx Posted December 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 25, 2009 That was a fairly unnecessary comment' date=' and with no use in that, I feel you are kind of stuck up about your cards. Regardless that any cards coming out are OP'd, we appreciate balanced cards on this Forum. If you can't appreciate that, then we don't need you posting cards.Anywho, The cards are fairly simple, and I find nothing but a slight OP that wouldn't make much difference in a game. The cards have OCG Errors, but they're nothing to serious for correcting..... I give you about..... 8.5 altogether out of 10.[/quote'] Since you found my last comment offensive, I erased it. Just 2 questions. 1. Where are the OCG errors?2. What would you do to my cards if you were me? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
◊ Hᵃᵏᵃˢᵉ ◊ Posted December 25, 2009 Report Share Posted December 25, 2009 I'll just do the whole OCG Correction.... Explaining is too annoying. 1st Card:Once per turn during your Main Phase, by discarding 1 card, you can take control of 1 monster your opponent controls until the End Phase of your turn. 2nd Card:As long as you control this face-up card, reduce all Battle Damage from a Direct Attack to 0. This card can only be used for the Accel Synchro Summon of a LIGHT Synchro Monster. 3rd Card:As long as this card remains face-up on the field, the effects of DARK monsters are negated. When this card destroys a non-LIGHT monster as a result of battle, your opponent randomly discards 1 card. When this card destroys a DARK monster as a result of battle, inflict 1000 damage to your opponent. Not completely sure about the 3rd Card's OCG. Its wording is awkward, so I tried to fix it in a way I thought might work.I have no need to change your cards for you. I simply help correct your OCG. It's up to you to correct these cards. They're your work, not mine. I put some thoughts into fruition, but didn't completely change them. The rest of the edits are up to you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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