The Dragoons

[pokemonking3000]

An incomplete series of monsters i came up with while looking at pictures if dragons

 

 

If this card is used for the Synchro Summon of a "Dragoon" Synchro Monster, draw 1 card. Once per turn, select and activate 1 of the following effects:

Decrease this card's Level by and Decrease this Card's ATK by 500: Draw 1 card.

Increase this card's Level by 1 and Increase this Card's ATK by 500: Discard 1 card.

 

Once per turn, you can select 1 face-up "Dragoon" monster. Discard cards from your hand equal to or less than the Level of the selected monster. The selected monsters Level becomes equal to the amount of cards you discarded.

 

This card is also treated as a DARK monster. Once per turn, you can activate 1 of the following effects:

-Discard 1 LIGHT "Dragoon" monster. Special Summon 1 DARK "Dragoon" monster from your Graveyard.

-Discard 1 DARK "Dragoon" monster. Special Summon 1 LIGHT "Dragoon" monster from your Graveyard

 

Once per turn, you may discard 1 "Dragoon" monster from your hand, to have this card's Level become equal to the discarded Monster's Level.

During the Battle Phase this Card gains ATK equal to this Card's Level x 300

 

Remove from play this face-up monster to return 3 cards your opponent controls to their Deck. By removing from play 2 face-up "Dragoon" monsters you control, you can Special Summon this card. You cannot activate this card's effect during the turn it was Special Summoned.

 

1 "Dragoon" Tuner + 1 or more Non-Tuner WATER monsters

Once per turn, you can discard 1 WATER or 1 "Dragoon" monster to destroy 1 card on the field. If this card destroys a Defense Position monster as a result of battle, draw 1 card.

 

1 "Dragoon" Tuner + 1 or more Non-Tuner WIND monsters

Once per turn, you can return 2 "Dragoon" monsters from your Graveyard to the Deck. Then, shuffle the Deck. During your opponent's Battle Phase, you can discard any number of cards to the Graveyard. This card gains ATK equal to the amount of cards you discarded x400.

[Rehva]

O_O Wow...

 

Pics? Overused :]

 

Effect? Balanced enough... You Got Synchros All Wrong >.>

 

OCG Errors/Misspellings? Very Nice for a New Member. I Spot A Few Though.

 

Overall, very Good For a New Member :] You deserve a Rep [:

 

8.2/10

[pokemonking3000]

O_O Wow...

 

Pics? Overused :]

 

Effect? Balanced enough... You Got Synchros All Wrong >.>

 

OCG Errors/Misspellings? Very Nice for a New Member. I Spot A Few Though.

 

Overall' date=' very Good For a New Member :'] You deserve a Rep [:

 

8.2/10

 

Thank You.

What Would YOU suggest needs fixing( Besides Tempest Dragoon)

[Rehva]

Deck - deck

 

Monster - monster

 

Non - Tuner ~ non - Tuner

 

thats all i can spot, Really :]

[ragnarok1945]

both your synchros are UPed for having only 1 effect, which makes them balanced, but synchros are supposed to be OPed

 

likewise, Flame Dragoon needs another effect also

 

8.3/10 since you're new

[pherronboy]

u do have som ocg errors. i dont count for overused or blurry pics so 6/10

[pokemonking3000]

both your synchros are UPed for having only 1 effect' date=' which makes them balanced, but synchros are supposed to be OPed

 

likewise, Flame Dragoon needs another effect also

 

8.3/10 since you're new

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OK, Thanks , I'll try to fix that

[ragnarok1945]

for Flame Dragoon's raising levels, you should also raise its atk power a little if you do that

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1st Card:

Once per turn, you can Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "Dragoon" monster from your Graveyard. A monster Special Summoned by this card's effect is destroyed during the End Phase.

(I made it Level 4 or Lower, since Level 6 is a little too much.)

 

2nd Card:

Once per turn, you can discard 1 "Dragoon" monster from your hand to have this card's Level become equal to the discarded monster's Level. During your Battle Phase, this card gains ATK equal to this card's Level x300.

(Make it a "Dragoon" monster, since any monster is a little too much.)

 

3rd Card:

If this card is used for the Synchro Summon of a "Dragoon" Synchro Monster, draw 1 card. Once per turn, select and activate 1 of the following effects:

Decrease this card's Level by 1: Draw 1 card.

Increase this card's Level by 1: Discard 1 card.

 

4th Card:

Once per turn, you can select 1 face-up "Dragoon" monster. Discard cards from your hand equal to or less than the Level of the selected monster. The selected monsters Level becomes equal to the amount of cards you discarded.

 

5th Card:

This card is also treated as a DARK monster. Once per turn, you can activate 1 of the following effects:

-Discard 1 LIGHT "Dragoon" monster. Special Summon 1 DARK "Dragoon" monster from your Graveyard.

-Discard 1 DARK "Dragoon" monster. Special Summon 1 LIGHT "Dragoon" monster from your Graveyard.

 

6th Card:

Remove from play this face-up monster to return 3 cards your opponent controls to their Deck. By removing from play 2 face-up "Dragoon" monsters you control, you can Special Summon this card. You cannot activate this card's effect during the turn it was Special Summoned.

 

7th Card:

1 "Dragoon" Tuner + 1 or more Non-Tuner WATER monsters

Once per turn, you can discard 1 WATER or 1 "Dragoon" monster to destroy 1 card on the field. If this card destroys a Defense Position monster as a result of battle, draw 1 card.

 

8th Card:

1 "Dragoon" Tuner + 1 or more Non-Tuner WIND monsters

Once per turn, you can return 2 "Dragoon" monsters from your Graveyard to the Deck. Then, shuffle the Deck. During your opponent's Battle Phase, you can discard any number of cards to the Graveyard. This card gains ATK equal to the amount of cards you discarded x400.

 

 

Omg, finally done. Rofl. You didn't have absolutely horrible OCG. A lot of it was actually right. I went ahead and fixed everything. : )

Hope it helped.

[pokemonking3000]

1st Card:

Once per turn' date=' you can Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "Dragoon" monster from your Graveyard. A monster Special Summoned by this card's effect is destroyed during the End Phase.

(I made it Level 4 or Lower, since Level 6 is a little too much.)

 

2nd Card:

Once per turn, you can discard 1 "Dragoon" monster from your hand to have this card's Level become equal to the discarded monster's Level. During your Battle Phase, this card gains ATK equal to this card's Level x300.

(Make it a "Dragoon" monster, since any monster is a little too much.)

 

3rd Card:

If this card is used for the Synchro Summon of a "Dragoon" Synchro Monster, draw 1 card. Once per turn, select and activate 1 of the following effects:

Decrease this card's Level by 1: Draw 1 card.

Increase this card's Level by 1: Discard 1 card.

 

4th Card:

Once per turn, you can select 1 face-up "Dragoon" monster. Discard cards from your hand equal to or less than the Level of the selected monster. The selected monsters Level becomes equal to the amount of cards you discarded.

 

5th Card:

This card is also treated as a DARK monster. Once per turn, you can activate 1 of the following effects:

-Discard 1 LIGHT "Dragoon" monster. Special Summon 1 DARK "Dragoon" monster from your Graveyard.

-Discard 1 DARK "Dragoon" monster. Special Summon 1 LIGHT "Dragoon" monster from your Graveyard.

 

6th Card:

Remove from play this face-up monster to return 3 cards your opponent controls to their Deck. By removing from play 2 face-up "Dragoon" monsters you control, you can Special Summon this card. You cannot activate this card's effect during the turn it was Special Summoned.

 

7th Card:

1 "Dragoon" Tuner + 1 or more Non-Tuner WATER monsters

Once per turn, you can discard 1 WATER or 1 "Dragoon" monster to destroy 1 card on the field. If this card destroys a Defense Position monster as a result of battle, draw 1 card.

 

8th Card:

1 "Dragoon" Tuner + 1 or more Non-Tuner WIND monsters

Once per turn, you can return 2 "Dragoon" monsters from your Graveyard to the Deck. Then, shuffle the Deck. During your opponent's Battle Phase, you can discard any number of cards to the Graveyard. This card gains ATK equal to the amount of cards you discarded x400.

 

 

Omg, finally done. Rofl. You didn't have absolutely horrible OCG. A lot of it was actually right. I went ahead and fixed everything. : )

Hope it helped.

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Yeah, i knew there would by quite a few OCG errors. "Leveler Dragoon" & "Thunderburst Dragon" Wee some of the harder ones

[Aero~]

good OCG

good names

9/10

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Don't need to worry so much about the OCG, but people just prefer it be correct, ya know? Anywho, the concept of each card is great. I really liked them. : )

8.5/10

(Gotta minus the 1.5 for OCG. Sorry pal.)

[Rusty Shovel]

Don't need to worry so much about the OCG' date=' but people just prefer it be correct, ya know? Anywho, the concept of each card is great. I really liked them. : )

8.5/10

(Gotta minus the 1.5 for OCG. Sorry pal.)

[/quote']

 

I would have to agree.

 

:D good job.