wdmr Posted December 24, 2009 Report Share Posted December 24, 2009 well this is my first card so i thought i'd see how good it is: Effect:Equip only to a "Stardust Dargon", "Stardust Dragon/Assault Mode" or "Majestic Star Dragon". The Equipped Monster gains 500 ATK Points and cannot be returned to the Deck. Once Per-Turn you can activate one of the following effects: ● Destroy One Card on the Field. ● Your Opponent has to randomly discard one Card from their Hand. When the Equipped Monster is Tributed by it's own Effect you can Tribute this Card instead. (That Monster's Effect cannot be Negated). When this Card is sent to the Gravyard during your End-Phase you can return this Card to your Hand. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 24, 2009 Report Share Posted December 24, 2009 you misspelled "equipped" for the effects, I'd only allow you to activate them once per turn 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wdmr Posted December 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 24, 2009 did i? opps sorry i type a bit fast sometimes then i misspell so instead of when it inflicts battle damage just i can activate the effect once per-turn battle damage or not? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 24, 2009 Report Share Posted December 24, 2009 yeah that would certainly make it a little better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wdmr Posted December 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 24, 2009 ok then edited :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 24, 2009 Report Share Posted December 24, 2009 that's better, I'll raise the rate to 9.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aero~ Posted December 24, 2009 Report Share Posted December 24, 2009 for a first card, it's really good, other than some minor errors. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
◊ Hᵃᵏᵃˢᵉ ◊ Posted December 24, 2009 Report Share Posted December 24, 2009 Equip only to "Stardust Dragon", "Stardust Dragon/Assault Mode" or "Majestic Star Dragon". The Equipped Monster gains 500 ATK and cannot be returned to the Extra Deck. When the Equipped monster inflicts Battle Damage your opponent can activate 1 of the following effects: ● Destroy 1 card on the field. ● Your opponent randomly discards 1 card from their hand. When the Equipped monster is Tributed by it's own Effect you can Tribute this Card instead. (That Monster's Effect cannot be Negated). When this card is sent to the Graveyard during your End Phase you can return this card to your hand. My computer is acting up, so if all the corrections aren't correct, then I'm sorry.Overall, 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wdmr Posted December 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 24, 2009 im assuming the pic isn't as good as it could be but i don't have photoshop or GIMP yet :( but thanks for the comments :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
◊ Hᵃᵏᵃˢᵉ ◊ Posted December 24, 2009 Report Share Posted December 24, 2009 The pic could be a little more representative of Stardust, ya know? Maybe have Stardust Dragon emitting a light. That would be awesome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuri Posted December 24, 2009 Report Share Posted December 24, 2009 9/10 very good for your first cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wdmr Posted December 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 24, 2009 hmm i think i could find a pic like that thanks! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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