~Wright~ Posted December 24, 2009 Report Share Posted December 24, 2009 An extremely exciting card! =p[spoiler=Lore] If card is removed from play, you can remove from play 2 monsters in your Graveyard to return this card to your Graveyard. This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned, except from your hand or Graveyard, by removing from play 1 DARK monster you control. If that monster is "Armageddon Knight," you can return up to 2 of your removed from play monsters to your Graveyard. When this card is Special Summoned, send up to 2 monsters from your Deck to your Graveyard. You cannot activate their effects or Special Summon them until your next turn. If this card is sent to the Graveyard from the field, remove it from play, then remove from play 2 monsters from your Graveyard. If you cannot, remove from play all of the monsters in your Graveyard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
◊ Hᵃᵏᵃˢᵉ ◊ Posted December 24, 2009 Report Share Posted December 24, 2009 Wow, he seems more UP'd, than anything else. <.<Frankly, the only OCG Errors that matter are at the beginning. If this card is removed from play, you can remove from play 2 monsters in your Graveyard to return this card to your Graveyard. That is all I see, but the thing is, it removes and sends to the Graveyard to much. The concept just seems a little beyond necessary. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aero~ Posted December 24, 2009 Report Share Posted December 24, 2009 slightly UP'ed.what if you remove Armaggedon knight, then use this card's effect to return him to the graveyard? Then, CoTH on the other monster, wich happenned to be extremely powerful. Very creative. fix this part, and it's a 9.99999999999999999/10, now it's a 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rusty Shovel Posted December 24, 2009 Report Share Posted December 24, 2009 A little UP'ed but otherwise food. Good pic. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Wright~ Posted December 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 24, 2009 Wow' date=' he seems more UP'd, than anything else. <.<Frankly, the only OCG Errors that matter are at the beginning. [b']If[/b] this card is removed from play, you can remove from play 2 monsters in your Graveyard to return this card to your Graveyard.Thank you, corrections have been made. That is all I see, but the thing is, it removes and sends to the Graveyard to much. The concept just seems a little beyond necessary.This card is pretty much supposed to give you a ridiculous amount of control over your graveyard. If you have any other advice, feel free to say it. :) slightly UP'ed.what if you remove Armaggedon knight' date=' then use this card's effect to return him to the graveyard? Then, CoTH on the other monster, wich happenned to be extremely powerful. Very creative. fix this part, and it's a 9.99999999999999999/10, now it's a 8/10[b']I don't quite understand what you're trying to say.[/b] A little UP'ed but otherwise food. Good pic. 8/10Thank you for the rate. Do you have any critique?Changes have been made. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Krokosaurus Posted December 25, 2009 Report Share Posted December 25, 2009 Good pic and good effect. Nicely done!9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 25, 2009 Report Share Posted December 25, 2009 with with the changes the effect now looks well balanced out and suited for it the OCG is fine the way it is, only the pic is a little overused 9.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
◊ Hᵃᵏᵃˢᵉ ◊ Posted December 25, 2009 Report Share Posted December 25, 2009 Make his ATK either 2400 or 2500. I think, even with his ridiculous effect, he deserves a few extra ATK points. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Wright~ Posted December 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 25, 2009 Okay, I'll make the changes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Mousy Posted December 25, 2009 Report Share Posted December 25, 2009 With a fail and stupidly overused pic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Wright~ Posted December 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 25, 2009 With a fail and stupidly overused pic. What's wrong with it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Mousy Posted December 25, 2009 Report Share Posted December 25, 2009 Didn't I say that already? It's a picture that doesn't have the guy centered with insufficient background, and somehow manages to be stupidly overused. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Wright~ Posted December 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 25, 2009 Didn't I say that already? It's a picture that doesn't have the guy centered with insufficient background' date=' and somehow manages to be stupidly overused.[/quote'] I thought it looked cool... :?What do you think of the card other than the pic? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
◊ Hᵃᵏᵃˢᵉ ◊ Posted December 25, 2009 Report Share Posted December 25, 2009 Did you read his Sig? He said the same thing about my stuff. He said, take reference to his Sig. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Wright~ Posted December 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 25, 2009 I thought that was a joke... :? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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