ShootingTheMoon Posted December 25, 2009 Report Share Posted December 25, 2009 In 2010, I will start two archetypes called Permafrost and Frostbite, all will have unique effects, and will include a new Subtype for Permafrosts called "Frozen". The Special Part of the Frozen archetype allows the monster to stop the other monsters from attacking once for a whole Battle Phase. While the Special Part of the Frostbite archetype has the subtype "Reline" you can use your opponet's monsters against them. That will happen with the use of tokens. [spoiler=Frostbite Archetype][spoiler=EN000 Frostbite Dragon]LORE:One Tuner + One or more WATER non-tuner Monsters The effect of this card cannot be negated (you can choose to stop this effect, if you do, destroy this card). During your Main Phase 1, draw 2 cards. If 1 or more monster(s) is a "Frostbite" or "Permafrost" monster, you Special Summoned it your field in face-up Attack position, ignoring all summoning conditions. This card is also treated as a DARK monster while face-up on your field.NOTE: I know Permafrost Dragon doesn't have the subtype, Synchros, Fusions, and Rituals don't have it. [spoiler=Permafrost Archetype][spoiler=Permafrost's White Robot]LORE:One LIGHT Machine Monster + One or more non-Tuner MonstersThis card cannot be summoned during the Main Phase 1. It can only be summoned Main Phase 2. When this is the only card on your field, you can half you Life Points and half this card's ATK so you can Special Summon two cards from your Graveyard in ATK position. [spoiler=Permafrost - Wander Kun The Legend]LORE:While this card is face-up no monster in your opponet's control can attack during their Battle Phase. During your Battle Phase this card is in your hand and you have under 2000 Life Points you may Special Summon it and destroy all monsters in ATK Position. [spoiler=Bo-Bo's][spoiler=Mystical Ice Bo-Bo and it's Evolution]LORE:This card can only be Special Summoned after "Frostebite Dragon" is sent to your graveyard. If you discard a card from your hand, you can Special Summon two Level 3 monsters from your hand. When this card is destroyed, remove it from play. You cannot Summon this card if there is a Level 4 of higher monster in your control, this card card cannot be Summoned. LORE:"Mystical Ice Bo-Bo" + One WATER Non-Tuner MonsterThere can only be 1 face-up "Titan" monster on the field. Once per turn you may discard your hand and draw 5 more cards. For each Spell Card you drew, your opponet loses 200 Life Points. I give full credit to Wanderley. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShootingTheMoon Posted December 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 25, 2009 BUMP? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blazer Posted December 25, 2009 Report Share Posted December 25, 2009 Good Topic,The OCG looks fine I dont need to edit. That gives it a solid 9.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShootingTheMoon Posted December 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 25, 2009 Thanks ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Leo Posted December 25, 2009 Report Share Posted December 25, 2009 Interesting. In the Synchro Summoning part i should be this. 1 DARK Tuner monster + 1 WATER non-tuner Monster For the first one and 1 LIGHT Machine Monster + 1 or more non-Tuner Monsters For the Second one. I can't wait to see what cards you make with these ~9/10~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShootingTheMoon Posted December 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 25, 2009 Thanks. Some of the best ratings i've ever gotten ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twenty-five Zero Oh-oh Posted December 25, 2009 Report Share Posted December 25, 2009 I'm not such a big fan of the last pic.OCG:The effect of this card cannot be negated. (if you choose to stop this card's effect destroy this card[Wait What?!?!]). During your Main Phase 1, draw 2 cards. If any one of those cards was a "Frostbite" or "Permafrost" monster, it can be Special Summoned to the field in Attack position ignoring all summoning conditions. While this card remains face-up on the field, this card is also treated as a DARK Monster. OCG:This card can only be summoned during (your) Main Phase 2. While this card is the only monster (on your side of the field)/(you control), you can pay half of your Life Points and decrease this card's ATK by half to Special Summon two monsters from your Graveyard in Attack position. OCG:While this card remains face-up on the field, monsters your opponent controls cannot declare an Attack. If you have under 2000 Life Points and this card is in your hand during your Battle Phase you can Special Summon this card and destroy all monsters in Attack Position. Whoo! I think I fixed the ocg properly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twin Seed Posted December 25, 2009 Report Share Posted December 25, 2009 @25000: Sorry, you're off a little. OCG: The effect of this card cannot be negated (you can choose to stop this effect, if you do, destroy this card). During your Main Phase 1, draw 2 cards. If 1 or more monster(s) is a "Frostbite" or "Permafrost" monster, you Special Summoned it your field in face-up Attack position, ignoring all summoning conditions. This card is also treated as a DARK monster while face-up on your field. OCG: This card can only be summoned during your Main Phase 2. While this card is the only monster you control, you can pay half of your Life Points and decrease this card's ATK by half to Special Summon two monsters from your Graveyard in face-up Attack Position. OCG: While this card remains face-up on your field, your opponent cannot conduct there Battle Phase. If you have 2000 Life Points or less, and this is the only card in your hand during your Battle Phase, you can Special Summon this card from your hand in face-up Defense Position and destroy all Attack Position monster(s) on the field. That OCG is perfect, or nearly atleast, so just copy and paste it. Love the concept. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 25, 2009 Report Share Posted December 25, 2009 the OCG correction is already up and for the most part the errors aren't too big anyway the concept though is quite good, so I'll give you 8.9/10 on this Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShootingTheMoon Posted December 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 BUMP. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jazin Kay Posted December 26, 2009 Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 I'm usually not one to complain about this sort of thing, but... why is that robot a Nazi? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShootingTheMoon Posted December 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 I dunno, it was a cool pic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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