Krokosaurus Posted December 26, 2009 Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 My newest creation. I hope you´ll enjoy and please rate and comment:D!!! Lore:You may Special Summon this card when you control exactly 2 monsters and they are both Beast-Type monsters. Once per turn, you may Tribute 1 Beast-Type monster you control. If you do, pick up one card from your deck. If that card is a Beast-Type Monster, Special Summon it to your side of the field. If not, add that card to your hand. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ParadoxDuelist Posted December 26, 2009 Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 Could you post the effect please? The effect isn't really that clear. PM me when you've updated it looks promising. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.area51player. Posted December 26, 2009 Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 theyre = they are. may = can. tribute = Tribute. You don't need to say "Immediatelly". Just Special Summon. Hand = hand.Pic looks fine.The effect isn't that creative, and it's a bit boring.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ParadoxDuelist Posted December 26, 2009 Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 Thanks, here's my re-write:"You can Special Summon this card from your hand when you control exactly 2 Beast-Type monsters. Once per turn, you can Tribute 1 Beast-Type monster you control to pick up one card from your deck. If that card is a Beast-Type Monster, it is immediately Special Summon it to your side of the field. If that card is not a Beast-Type monster, it is added to your hand." Nice concept, though your pic is slightly leaning into the dinosaur region. I'd change it to a Dinosaur-Type personally but to each his own. I'll give you an A Rank. Nice job and keep it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheVaron Posted December 26, 2009 Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 Just looking at the pic and it kinda looks to me like it should be a fusion or a synchro. Just an idea. with the ocg fixes 8/10. its nothing too special Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwilightSoul Posted December 26, 2009 Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 I like it it's good to see more beast types 4/5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Krokosaurus Posted December 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 every OCG errors fixed :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 26, 2009 Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 been a while since I've seen that pic the OCG looks fine now effect is quite balanced out too 9.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Krokosaurus Posted December 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 wow, thanks!!! :D:D:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted December 26, 2009 Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 I swear. I didn't think it said "Lionheart" before entering this thread. [/Total Lie] You can Special Summon this card when you control exactly 2 Beast-Type monsters. Once per turn' date=' you can Tribute 1 Beast-Type monster you control. If you do, pick up one card from your deck. If that card is a Beast-Type Monster, Special Summon it to your side of the field. If not, add that card to your hand.[/quote'] Nice Beast support. Although...It's effect is kind of dimming. You switch out a Beast for another, and if it's not a Beast, you might wind up wasting your monster. A game of chance. I like it. 9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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