Jolta Posted December 26, 2009 Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 Haha, see if this is a Ben 10 card. [spoiler=Way Big!]1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monstersWhen this card is Synchro Summoned, remove from play 7 Fish-Type monsters from your Graveyard. While this card is face-up in Attack Position, all face-up Fish-Type monsters on the field gain 800 ATK. When this card is sent to the Graveyard, you may toss a coin. If heads, you may increase your Life Points by 200. If tails, destroy all card on the field. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 26, 2009 Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 not very creative of a card name change may to can and the last sentence it's "cards", not "card" 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted December 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 not very creative of a card name The same applies to "Alien X", "Big Chill" and "Brainstorm", and "Ripjaws", I literally used the names of Ben 10 Aliens. :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 26, 2009 Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 ok, well I never said you had to change the card name but the errors still stand Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Leturn Master Posted December 26, 2009 Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 Look! It's a WAYhle!!! AHAHAHAHA!!!!! Nice card. It looks awesome.... sorta.... first off, it's a 6-star with 3900 ATK, you gotta fix that. Take those stats down, or raise the level to 9+. Secondly, it's "can", not "may". And thirdly, why would I flip that coin? It's only 200 LP anyway... or did you mean 2000 LP? 'cause that's a BIG... no, sorry... a WAY BIG error in your OCGSP. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted December 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 Oh, I didn't want heal that much, but maybe I should heal a WAY BIG amount. That works in Meta Decks. Tails would cause a WAY BIG massive destruction, unless there's nothing to kill. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Leturn Master Posted December 26, 2009 Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 Oh' date=' I didn't want heal that much, but maybe I [i']should[/i] heal a WAY BIG amount. That works in Meta Decks. Tails would cause a WAY BIG massive destruction, unless there's nothing to kill. Well, 200 is way small. I think 2000 is actually a decent amount. I mean, the only time someone would use the effect is if they have 1-to-0 monsters on the field, just in case it fails and they lose their monsters. At that point, they're probably not great on the defensive side (probably, I say. Probably) and 2000 LP wouldn't be a bad idea. It'd also give you the opportunity to fix up the OCGSP so that it's 'cards' and not "card" in that last sentence. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted December 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 I've got ya, 2000 it is. Man, I should make a better field nuker next time... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted December 26, 2009 Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 not very creative of a card name /card not very creative of a card name The same applies to "Alien X"' date=' "Big Chill" and "Brainstorm", and "Ripjaws", I literally used the names of Ben 10 Aliens. :P[/quote'] You forget, they come up with terrible names. Especially the obvious "Fourarms". Oh' date=' I didn't want heal that much, but maybe I [i']should[/i] heal a WAY BIG amount. That works in Meta Decks. Tails would cause a WAY BIG massive destruction, unless there's nothing to kill. STOP SAYING WAY BIG. ARRRRRRGH. OCG seems...decent. Picture is fine. The Level needs to be higher or you need to lower the ATK. I'd increase the healing effect too. Atleast...400 or something? Also, it's second effect makes it like a Arcana Force monster. Except it isn't really a negative effect since you're nuking your opponent too. Meh.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted December 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 Phew! Good thing I haven't started on Fourarms yet. Thanks for help. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Demon Eyes Kyo Posted December 26, 2009 Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 Nice card, Love the pic minor OCG though so,8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted December 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 Hehehe... Glad ya gaiz likey Whales! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jazin Kay Posted December 26, 2009 Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 Wow, I completely misunderstood this thread's title. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted December 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 Hehe... people mistake this for an white and red Alien? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aero~ Posted December 26, 2009 Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 way OP'ed. It's effect brings it to 3800. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Leturn Master Posted December 27, 2009 Report Share Posted December 27, 2009 way OP'ed. It's effect brings it to 3800. I'd say it's a fair price for dealing -1 or -2 to yourself AND rfp-ing more or less ALL monsters in your Graveyard... even if they ARE Fish-type. Actually, it'd be nice if this guy were lvl 11. Then you could pull it off with that "Royal Swamp Eel" and "Coelacanth" combo.... and you could boost the ATK to something insanely higher, too. :mrgreen: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Demon Eyes Kyo Posted December 27, 2009 Report Share Posted December 27, 2009 way OP'ed. It's effect brings it to 3800.Think of the tuner you'll need then talk Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
archie17 Posted December 27, 2009 Report Share Posted December 27, 2009 that whale hardly looks like a 3100 attack monster, maybe 2100 but not in the 3000s. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted December 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 27, 2009 It does look too happy. Too happy to be powerful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Shadow Thief~ Posted December 27, 2009 Report Share Posted December 27, 2009 Awsome!!! I like the title the best :) Title=the power of simplicity nice card 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted December 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 27, 2009 Thanks a lot!Never knew some people liked these simple names. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Demon Eyes Kyo Posted December 27, 2009 Report Share Posted December 27, 2009 BEN10 FTW Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted December 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 27, 2009 Woah, that came outta nowhere. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Demon Eyes Kyo Posted December 27, 2009 Report Share Posted December 27, 2009 LOL.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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