Jonny Posted December 26, 2009 Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 Im not really a good cardmaker , and my OCG is bad , seriously....But im trieng :/ [spoiler=Lore]This card is also treated as a Zombie-Type monster while it is face-up on the field. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 2 DARK monsters you control. When this card is Summoned it gains ATK equal to the Level of the tributed monsters x 100. Each time "Razzor, Destruction Minion" successfully attacks your opponents Life Points you can place 1 Raz Counter on this card. You can tribute this monster with 3 Raz Counters on it to Special Summon 3 Level 3 or lower DARK monsters from your hand or deck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted December 26, 2009 Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 This card is also treated as a Zombie-Type monster while face-up on the field. This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 2 DARK-Type monsters you control as a Tribute. When this card is Summoned' date=' Increase the of this card attack by 100 equal to the combined Level of the tributed monsters. Each time "Razzor , Destruction Minion" succesfully inflicts battle damage to your oppenents Life Points place 1 Raz counter on this card, when this card has 3 Raz counters on it, you can tribute this card to Summon 3 lvl 3 or lower Dark monsters on the field.[/quote'] Somewhat fixed. I don't know what you originally intended to have in it, so yeah. Seems decently balanced. Since most people would only tribute level 4 or lower monsters. So the common amount of ATK you would get is around 2700-2800. Then you get 3 more monsters for a quick folder. Nice. I like it. Nice pic too.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jonny Posted December 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 thnaks for the fix ;) and crap why did i put undead Oo it was zombie! xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ParadoxDuelist Posted December 26, 2009 Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 Here's my re-write if you want it:This card is also treated as a Zombie-Type monster while it is face-up on the field. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 2 DARK monsters you control. When this card is Summoned it gains ATK equal to the Level of the tributed monsters x 100. Each time "Razzor, Destruction Minion" successfully attacks your opponents Life Points you can place 1 Raz Counter on this card. You can tribute this monster with 3 Raz Counters on it to Special Summon 3 Level 3 or lower DARK monsters from your hand or deck. Pretty substandard effect. I like it and it would make a great addition to any Zombie or DARK attributed deck. Rank B because of the OCG, if it were fixed it'd be an A Rank. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jonny Posted December 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 ty ^^fixed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted December 26, 2009 Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 OHSNAP. Messed up on the tribute part. It's suppose to be "Tributes" not "a Tribute". Sorry about that screw up xDNever mind. You used the other fix. Lol. 9.5/10 now. I'll probably fix my rating when I see how in operates in a Dinosaur or Zombie deck...or a Zombie/Dinosaur Hybrid deck o_o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jonny Posted December 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 bumpz Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aero~ Posted December 26, 2009 Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 26, 2009 Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 nice to see more dino support it has a nice way to boost itself, which makes the 2000 base atk reasonable for lv8 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jonny Posted December 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 27, 2009 thnaks Xian and Ragna ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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