Slicer224 Posted December 26, 2009 Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 Hello YCM users this is a new set please rate,comment, and enjoy! NEW!!!If you look at this thread comment DON'T JUST LOOK!!! COMMENT!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted December 26, 2009 Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 Cards need work. Your OCG is off by a smidge, Let's fix that. Mmkay? OCG Fix:Silent Warrior: Braver KnightOnce per turn, you can tribute one monster you control to increase this card's ATK by 500 untill the end of the battle phase. Silent Warrior: ShinobiWhen this card is Normal Summoned or Set, You can Special Summon one level 4 or lower "Silent Warrior". Now, for the ratings.3/10. Because you seem to be doing it wrong. Silent Warrior: Heroic Knight should NOT have gold text in it's name on a Normal Monster card. It's eye bleeding. Plus it's too powerful for a Normal Monster. I'd add a effect with summoning costs. Heroic Kain needs a effect. Kain's level is too low for a 2800 ATK point monster. Level it up to 7 to 8. Magician Knight is fine, but remove the Spellcaster/Warrior. It's one or the other. Ninjutsu is fine. Fix it up. They could be better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slicer224 Posted December 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 Thnx fixing now! :)Fixed cards!!! ;0 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted December 26, 2009 Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 NOW we're looking good there buddy! <3 Some stuff still needs fixing, but for now. It's pretty good. Still need a Fusion effect though. o: 6.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slicer224 Posted December 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 Yeah I thought about that but I don't know what kind of effect would suit this card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted December 26, 2009 Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 Yeah I thought about that but I don't know what kind of effect would suit this card. Hmm...How about a piercing effect involving extra burn damage? Could work. Plus with the fusion materials, you'd think you'd get a super special awesome card. D: Pierce + Burn + Frontal Destruction That would be my idea. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slicer224 Posted December 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 Ok I'll try that thanks! :)Fusion card fix (Never done piercing damage Effect before.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted December 26, 2009 Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 Never did one? Huh. Well here's the OCG fix for you then. During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card' date=' inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent. For one time only, for three turns, you can inflict 500 points of damage to your opponent during each of their Standby Phases[/quote'] Bit of a fix.Burn is inflicting direct damage without monster's attacking.Piercing is a Attack Position monster battling a Defense position monster and dealing battle damage anyway. Just wanted to inform you. You seem like you don't know. D: Now as for the card. It's pretty decent. But underpowered. It needs a stronger effect. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slicer224 Posted December 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 I did I just didn't know what it was called! ;)Improvment I did I just didn't know what it was called! ;)Improvment Lore:Silent Warrior Heroic Knight+Silent Warrior: Kain. During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent. For one time only, for three turns, you can inflict 500 points of damage to your opponent during each of their Standby Phases. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted December 26, 2009 Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 The Fusion Material listings and the effect need to be on different lines. Sorry you have to change it so much. xD You know you can edit all of this to the first post, right? o: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slicer224 Posted December 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 Yeah I forget how.Yeah I forget how. Stupid right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted December 26, 2009 Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 Yeah I forget how.Yeah I forget how. Stupid right? Nah, It's alright. xD Just hit the edit button on your first post and pick Quick Edit or Full Edit. Which ever one you want. Then post 'em there. You are making more of these, right? 8D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slicer224 Posted December 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 Yep even posting some now k? :) So you like them? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted December 26, 2009 Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 Hmm...Seems slightly overpowered with the extra summoning. I'd add a drawback on only that part. Other than that, it's good. But somewhat bland. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slicer224 Posted December 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 Bland how? I can understand the OPed part.Yep even posting some now k? :) So you like them? D you like them should I keep making them give me you opinion.Yep even posting some now k? :) So you like them? Do you like them should I keep making them give me your opinion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted December 26, 2009 Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 Bland how? I can understand the OPed part. It's too short and down to the point. You just get to shuffle your deck and draw a card in hopes of a Silent Warrior. Depending on it' date=' your opponent's gonna be thinking "...So What?". D you like them should I keep making them give me you opinion I like them. They show good potential. With some fixes, they could become very good. Keep making them. 8D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slicer224 Posted December 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 Thanks I'll keep that in mind! :]Bland how? I can understand the OPed part. It's too short and down to the point. You just get to shuffle your deck and draw a card in hopes of a Silent Warrior. Depending on it' date=' your opponent's gonna be thinking "...So What?". D you like them should I keep making them give me you opinion So, most of them have more summoning effects which means more monsters on the Field and more trouble for them!;) I like them. They show good potential. With some fixes, they could become very good. Keep making them. 8D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted December 26, 2009 Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 Paladin is pretty...err...I actually can't tell. Overpowered because you can pretty much Special Summon anything and wait for your next turn, if it survived. Paladin Knight is decent. But since it doesn't have much of a effect, it'd be better as a Level 5 monster, unless you increase the ATK and DEF. Also take out that last part in Paladin Knight's effect. Special Summons don't require tributes unless it's listed. Meh.8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slicer224 Posted December 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 K then! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Krokosaurus Posted December 26, 2009 Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 Some cards are OPed.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Domi the Mystery Posted December 26, 2009 Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 Totally OPed cards. The Brave Knight, is a Vanilla and 3900 ATK?? OMG. About Shinobi.It can't be ...Summoned or Set. If its set, how can your opponent know if its Shinobi?? So, only Normal Summoned, without set. Bad OCG... Good pics.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 26, 2009 Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 your vanillas need spell/trap support to make them better as for the others, there's the OCG and spelling errors Silent Warrior Paladin is Uped for having only 1 effect, give it another one 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slicer224 Posted December 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 27, 2009 I'm going to post Spell and Trap cards later ragnarok1945Totally OPed cards. The Brave Knight' date=' is a Vanilla and 3900 ATK?? OMG. About Shinobi.It can't be ...Summoned or Set. If its set, how can your opponent know if its Shinobi?? So, only Normal Summoned, without set. Bad OCG... Good pics.4/10[/quote'] And you can do better I seriously doubt it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 27, 2009 Report Share Posted December 27, 2009 I'm glad to hear that. Then let me know when you do, k? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwilightSoul Posted December 27, 2009 Report Share Posted December 27, 2009 Not bad but some do seem a bit OP 3/5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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