bangge Posted December 27, 2009 Report Share Posted December 27, 2009 Hey Guys i want show my new card to your SOrry This card MUst be Update Someday[/img][/img][/img][/img][/img][/img][/img] EffectThis card cannot be normal summon or set, this card can only be special summon send 4 `Chubby` Monster form your side of the field, this card thread as WIND,FIRE,WATER,EARTH, When Your Turn This Card Thread as Magic/trap , this card gain attack by 500 Point for each `Chubby` Monster on your field or graveyard , when this card attack by your opponent Monster you can special summon many `Chubby` Monster form your graveyard to the field, at end phase return all your `Chubby` Monster form your field to your deck and shuffle it expect this card [/img][/img][/img] OK That all Ihave made ANd Give me REP+COMMENT OK Next Update -1Fusion MOnster-2Effect Monster-1Magic Card-1Trap card-2Syncro Monster Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted December 27, 2009 Report Share Posted December 27, 2009 Mouth Open wide You need to uncapitalize some words. say Trap and Spell, not Trap/Spell. Quite good for a newbie!9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bangge Posted December 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 27, 2009 THANk for your Comment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ParadoxDuelist Posted December 27, 2009 Report Share Posted December 27, 2009 Quite a few OCG errors there but it's still quite a good concept. By "Chubby" did you mean "Chibi" at all? Anyway Rank C for OCG and Rank B for idea. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bangge Posted December 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 27, 2009 THx for your comment sir i will improve my OCG Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Demon From The Void Posted December 27, 2009 Report Share Posted December 27, 2009 Som OCG errors, good pictures so 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
:^) Posted December 27, 2009 Report Share Posted December 27, 2009 Seen some of these Pictures before, OCG Errors, Unneeded and what not but overall nice for a 1 Star. 7600/Plywood (Plywood being 9000) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 27, 2009 Report Share Posted December 27, 2009 the OCG errors are to be expected since you're new there's also some capitalization and lower case letter errors, but that's nothing too big the effects are quite good for someone new though, so I'll give this 8.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bangge Posted December 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 28, 2009 oh sorry guys for that im form INDONESIA so i can`t to much to speak english Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted December 28, 2009 Report Share Posted December 28, 2009 You're new???OMG those are awsome!Send me all the pics for those and you'll get 1 or 2 REPS!!!Amazing picsEffects are okSome OCG fails, oh well....you're newQuite good for a new, keep up the good work ;)9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bighope Posted December 28, 2009 Report Share Posted December 28, 2009 I love! love! Love! the pix, are they self made, because I might want some...well just the clown one...and only if its alright with you...ok? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Smeagle Posted December 28, 2009 Report Share Posted December 28, 2009 Your OCG is really really bad, but the concept seems good and the pics are great. They don't really fit together, however, and they seem more "Chibi" than "Chubby." 7.9/10, anyhoo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bighope Posted December 28, 2009 Report Share Posted December 28, 2009 it is a little hard to understand the concept of your cards with all the OCG errors, but don’t feel bad, I’m still a little rusty when it comes to OCG Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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