some random cards here

[2Dual]

[Guest Zeonark]

I am going to kill someone if one more person keeps making ALL their cards have Gold Text. Here's the OCG Fix.

 

I can't even word Holy Light right...

When you would lose the duel' date=' you can Special Summon this monster from your hand or deck. This Special Summon cannot be negated. As long as you control this card, you cannot lose the duel. You can tribute this monster to increase your Life Points by 500 or destroy 1 card on the field.[/quote']

 

Change Holy Light to a Level 4 monster. If it's saving you from a loss, it needs to be stronger than level 3. /:

 

Sonic Lancer looks kinda...underpowered.

1000 Fist Avenger is balanced in my book.

Chimera Twin Fighter seems a bit overpowered. But that's only if people are dumb enough to tribute high level monsters. I dunno.

 

8/10.

[ragnarok1945]

for Sonic Lancer, the effect while balanced out seems a bit on the boring end

 

Chimera Twin Fighter's pic looks best, where did you get the pic?

 

9/10

[2Dual]

Chimera Twin Fighter seems a bit overpowered. But that's only if people are dumb enough to tribute high level monsters.

you got it, that's why I dont think this card is OPed, if you tribute a level 4 it becomes strong, but not OPed, tributing high lvl monsters would give it a really strong effect, but is it worthy? you lose a strong monster just to improve an effect.

 

anyway i wasnt really sure about shining savior's OCG, but i know some of the things you changed were right

 

ragnarock, the pics are from jazin kay's PB, that one too, and i'm not that satisfied on sonic lancer aswell tbh...

 

thanks both anyway (:

[magnific0H]

Great pictures

the effect on Holy light - shining saviour is brilliant

 

8.3/10

[Jazin Kay]

The moment you lose a duel, nothing can chain, as the

Game has ended.

[Aero~]

good OCG, can I use the pics? 9/10

[Dr. Percival Cox]

The moment you lose a duel' date=' nothing can chain, as the

Game has ended.

[/quote'] Thats right maybe you can change the effect to "When your life points would become 0 you can special summon this card from your hand deck or graveyard and gain 1000 life points. When this monster is special summoned this way its ATK and DEF are raised by 1000"

or something along those lines.

[Guest Zeonark]

The moment you lose a duel' date=' nothing can chain, as the

Game has ended.

[/quote'] Thats right maybe you can change the effect to "When your life points would become 0 you can special summon this card from your hand deck or graveyard and gain 1000 life points. When this monster is special summoned this way its ATK and DEF are raised by 1000"

or something along those lines.

 

When your Life Points hit 0, the duel is over. Unless you have something that's stopping you from losing.