Hawc Posted December 28, 2009 Report Share Posted December 28, 2009 Before creating this account, I had made cards, but I didn't save them obviously. I was having fun, but once I started visiting the forums and looking at some cards people had made, I decided to register so I could start commenting on their cards plus post my own for others to comment on. A common mistake I've been seeing earlier members making is not reading threads and learning OCG, which I think I have done successfully, re-doing some cards I made a while ago. I'll post two on this thread, and hopefully more in the future. ^-^ [align=center]I don't think this really needs for me to post the effect. I decided to make some Machine support here, and I thought, 'Well, robots are really pieces of metal stuck together, so what's to stop one robot becoming another by swapping some pieces around?' And so came this card. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by it's own effect. You can Special Summon from your hand by removing from play 3 Zombie-Type monsters in your Graveyard. Once per turn, you can select 1 Zombie-Type monster in your Deck and remove it from play. When this card is destroyed by a card effect, you can Special Summon 3 Zombie-Type monsters that are removed from play. This one was really a thought-of-the-moment idea that came to me, and I decided to pull it through after finding a nice picture that went with it.[/align] I would like both advice and comments please, along with fixes if I have errors (which I'm sure I do!), so any of these would be great and very helpful. :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted December 28, 2009 Report Share Posted December 28, 2009 Like me, you've been viewing stuff before you registered huh? :D Glad I wasn't the only one. Nice cards. Out Of The Wreckage has a nice picture. Decent and somewhat balanced. Don't think it's overpowered, unless you activate it when something like Ancient Gear Golem or Cyber Twin Dragon gets destroyed. Then it might be much. Vampiric Deathlord made me think it was gonna be a advanced Vampire Lord. Lol. Decent effect and good for Zombie Swarming. OCG seems nice. Not too many errors. I can't see a OCG error though. Tis Nais.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hawc Posted December 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 28, 2009 Like me' date=' you've been viewing stuff before you registered huh? :D Glad I wasn't the only one. Nice cards. Out Of The Wreckage has a nice picture. Decent and somewhat balanced. Don't think it's overpowered, unless you activate it when something like Ancient Gear Golem or Cyber Twin Dragon gets destroyed. Then it might be much.[/quote'] But that's really the point of combos, isn't it? I mean, you can activate cards to get Wulf to the top of your Deck and then mill it, and it's just comboing really. So, yeah. :3 Vampiric Deathlord made me think it was gonna be a advanced Vampire Lord. Lol. Decent effect and good for Zombie Swarming. OCG seems nice. Haha' date=' I really thought of the name based on the picture. ^-^ Not too many errors. I can't see a OCG error though. Tis Nais.9/10 Thanks a lot for the reviews, and wow, a 9/10 on my first two cards posted here! Guess reading that OCG thread really came in handy, eh? xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Krokosaurus Posted December 28, 2009 Report Share Posted December 28, 2009 Very good cards, nice pics and they´re both very balanced.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hawc Posted December 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 28, 2009 Very good cards' date=' nice pics and they´re both very balanced.9/10[/quote'] Thanks a lot, I appreciate the rating and comment. ^-^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 28, 2009 Report Share Posted December 28, 2009 for Vampiric Deathlord, "This card cannot be Special Summoned except by it's own effect. You can Special Summon from your hand by removing from play 3 Zombie-Type monsters in your Graveyard." should be "This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned from your hand except by releasing 3 Zombie-Type monsters in your Graveyard." 8.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hawc Posted December 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 28, 2009 for Vampiric Deathlord' date=' "This card cannot be Special Summoned except by it's own effect. You can Special Summon from your hand by removing from play 3 Zombie-Type monsters in your Graveyard." should be "This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned from your hand except by releasing 3 Zombie-Type monsters in your Graveyard." 8.8/10[/quote'] No, it shouldn't. Vampiric Deathlord can be Normal Summoned and Set, but it can also be Special Summoned by that effect. I appreciate your point, but I'm pretty sure that what I was going for is correct. :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 28, 2009 Report Share Posted December 28, 2009 ok, I didn't know what you were trying to get at then Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hawc Posted December 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 28, 2009 ok' date=' I didn't know what you were trying to get at then[/quote'] Fair enough, I can understand how I didn't make that clear. :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rehva Posted December 28, 2009 Report Share Posted December 28, 2009 :] Very Nice for a Newish Member 9.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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