Whirlwind Riku Posted December 12, 2007 Report Share Posted December 12, 2007 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aztex Posted December 12, 2007 Report Share Posted December 12, 2007 COOL! Nicely balanced. Good job there! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ryukei Posted December 12, 2007 Report Share Posted December 12, 2007 O loved your set. Keep it up! +1 Rep10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Whirlwind Riku Posted December 12, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 12, 2007 Thanks for the ratings you guys. I'll be adding more to this set later on, so keep coming back for more.I'm trying to make them seem like real cards do and not have super powerful effects or anything. I also need suggestions for the name of that last one, so if you wanna help me out... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted December 12, 2007 Report Share Posted December 12, 2007 hmmm Graveyard needs to be capitalized, and it should be Fire-Type not, FIRE monster. 8/10 =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted December 12, 2007 Report Share Posted December 12, 2007 Very nice cards. How about this for the name of the last one: Quick strike. I'll think of somthing better soon enough. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted December 12, 2007 Report Share Posted December 12, 2007 Very nice cards. How about this for the name of the last one: Quick strike. I'll think of somthing better soon enough. actually i think it should be named:The Strike of Spite Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mad Hopz Posted December 12, 2007 Report Share Posted December 12, 2007 great cards! nice pics, balanced, just a couple of small grammar and capitalization problems.9/10!For the last card you should call it: Burst Destruction Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Whirlwind Riku Posted December 12, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 12, 2007 It doesn't really come to me as a Quick Strike, and the pic wouldn't go along with the name if I called it Burst Destruction. I think I might call it Strike of Spite, but I'll wait to see if anyone has any better suggestions. Also, FIRE is an attribute, so it would be called "FIRE monster".You only put -type when you're referring to the type of the card (Fiend, Zombie, etc).However, I think you're right about the graveyard thing. Let me go check. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted December 12, 2007 Report Share Posted December 12, 2007 It doesn't really come to me as a Quick Strike' date=' and the pic wouldn't go along with the name if I called it Burst Destruction. I think I might call it Strike of Spite, but I'll wait to see if anyone has any better suggestions. Also, FIRE is an attribute, so it would be called "FIRE monster".You only put -type when you're referring to the type of the card (Fiend, Zombie, etc).However, I think you're right about the graveyard thing. Let me go check.[/quote'] lol i know i am right about the Graveyard thing, and i wasnt paying attention completely when i read the Fire thing, but only the F needs to be capitalized. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Whirlwind Riku Posted December 12, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 12, 2007 Alright, then I'll go update them. XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted December 12, 2007 Report Share Posted December 12, 2007 Alright' date=' then I'll go update them. XD[/quote']Â lol k =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Whirlwind Riku Posted December 12, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 12, 2007 UPDATEDawnbreak Whale added as LODF-EN007.-Needs to be Named- changed to Claw of the Dragon.Claw of the Dragon switched to LODF-EN013. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted December 12, 2007 Report Share Posted December 12, 2007 UPDATEDawnbreak Whale added as LODF-EN007.-Needs to be Named- changed to Claw of the Dragon.Claw of the Dragon switched to LODF-EN013. Claw of the Dragon, you might want to get a Dragon that shows a claw then. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wicket Posted December 12, 2007 Report Share Posted December 12, 2007 Cool cards, just need to fix a few OCG errors, other then that, they're really good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Whirlwind Riku Posted December 12, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 12, 2007 The pic does show a dragon's claw, though. I'm still going to change the name later, so he's still open to more suggestions. Â What OCG errors do I have? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted December 12, 2007 Report Share Posted December 12, 2007 The pic does show a dragon's claw' date=' though. I'm still going to change the name later, so he's still open to more suggestions. Â What OCG errors do I have?[/quote']Â sorry i ddint see that loland Graveyard in your Claw of the Dragon needs to be capitalized =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted December 13, 2007 Report Share Posted December 13, 2007 Hmm... some improvements could be made, but otherwise.... excellent. Good job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Whirlwind Riku Posted December 14, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 14, 2007 T_TStop tormenting me.What improvements on which card? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon Master Posted December 14, 2007 Report Share Posted December 14, 2007 not bad 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Briton of Rose Posted December 14, 2007 Report Share Posted December 14, 2007 A very nice group of cards. 9.5/10 because I would like to see more, please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Whirlwind Riku Posted December 18, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 18, 2007 UPDATESun Wu Kong the Monkey King added as LODF-EN008 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Archived
This topic is now archived and is closed to further replies.