green devil Posted December 28, 2009 Report Share Posted December 28, 2009 i've been working on some new undead ideas and here they are Once per turn, you can discard 1 monster from your hand to Special Summon 1 Zombie-Type monster from your Graveyard treat this as a Normal Summon whose Level is lower than the Level of the discarded monster. If you activate this effect you cannot Normal Summon other monsters this turn when this monster is destroyed it gets remove from play. if this card gets removed from the removed from play pile then you lose 1000 life points This monster cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 20 DARK monsters from your field, hand, deck, and Graveyard. This cards ATK is equal to the number of removed form play DARK monsters x150." Once per turn, you can Special Summon 1 removed from play DARK monster you must pay life points equal to the monsters level x150 When the Special Summon of a Zombie-Type monster from your Graveyard is treated as a Normal Summon, you can Special Summon this card from your Graveyard. During your End Phase, decrease the Level of this card by 1. Destroy this card when its Level becomes 0 by this effect If this card is in your Graveyard you can Special Summon it. treat this as a Normal Summon During the Battle Phase reveal your hand to your opponent. Discard every non-Zombie-Type monster in your hand. This card loses 200 ATK for each monster discarded by this effect. Then you can discard any number of Zombie-Type monsters in your hand to increase this cards ATK for each monster discarded x200 please give my ways to improve and ideas for new cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
:^) Posted December 28, 2009 Report Share Posted December 28, 2009 Massive OCG Errors, 0/PLYWOOD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silas Angel Posted December 28, 2009 Report Share Posted December 28, 2009 Capitalize please? Also, a summon from the Graveyard is always a Special Summon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
green devil Posted December 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 28, 2009 Capitalize please? Also' date=' a summon from the Graveyard is always a Special Summon.[/quote'] but if i changed it to special sumon then they could summon them and then summon thing else so i'd thought i bend the rules a bit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
:^) Posted December 28, 2009 Report Share Posted December 28, 2009 Capitalize please? Also' date=' a summon from the Graveyard is always a Special Summon.[/quote'] but if i changed it to special sumon then they could summon them and then summon thing else so i'd thought i bend the rules a bit^DOESNTUNDERSTANDANYTHING^ Change it to Special Summon, that way it makes Sence. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Killey Posted December 28, 2009 Report Share Posted December 28, 2009 I've corrected the OCG for each card and tried to reword the effects so that they are actually applicable. The best way to handle this issue of Normal Summoning from the Graveyard is to just call it a Special Summon and then add the clause that this Summon is treated as a Normal Summon. "Once per turn, you can discard 1 monster from your hand to Special Summon 1 Zombie-Type monster from your Graveyard (This Special Summon is treated as a Normal Summon) whose Level is lower than the Level of the discarded monster. If you activate this effect you cannot Normal Summon other monsters this turn." This is an okay card I guess. It's not particularly over powered at all and I'm almost inclined to call this under powered. Looking at current Zombie builds in the TCG/OCG you would need to discard a level 5 or higher monster in order to get key field swarm cards back on the field like Zombie Master and there are a ton of ways to get Zombie Master on the field from the Graveyard. This card is more suited towards a Zombie-World Hybrid deck of some sort. It may be abusable in those type of decks but I can't think of anything off the top of my head. "When this monster is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard it is removed from play instead. Take 1000 damage when this card is removed from the field." Not sure what you mean by in or out of play so I assumed you meant when it's sent to the grave or removed from play. Kind of iffy on this card. In the most typical Zombie build we are abusing special summoning to field swarm and this card isn't really beneficial to this cause as there are a ton of other cards with better attack that doesn't have a drawback like this. On the other hand its a 2000 beat stick but with Zombie World we can abuse other beat sticks instead. It's not overpowered but it's not that good of a card for Zombies. "This monster cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 20 DARK monsters from your field, hand, deck, and Graveyard. Once per turn, you can Special Summon 1 removed from play DARK monster. This cards ATK is equal to the number of removed form play DARK monsters x200." Broken card that can create specific OTK scenarios or create easy field swarming. You can also get an easy 4000 beat stick. Summon this and then flip Return from the Different Dimension for a OTK scenario or create easy swarming capabilities with D.D.R, Burial from a Different Dimension, or Escape from the Different Dimension. D.D.R would be more useful with cards like Red-Eyes Darkness Metal Dragon, Darklord Zerato, or Dark Horus among other things. "When the Special Summon of a Zombie-Type monster from your Graveyard is treated as a Normal Summon, you can Special Summon this card from your Graveyard. During your End Phase, decrease the Level of this card by 1. Destroy this card when its Level becomes 0 by this effect." I believe in the right builds this card can be extremely abusable and allows for good tribute/synchro fodder. It requires a specific build involving your continuous spell card but I could see potential abuse. "If this card is in your Graveyard you can Special Summon it (This Special Summon is treated as a Normal Summon)." There may be a flaw to my wording to treat the Special Summons as a Normal Summon as this card could potentially cause a broken infinite loop. It may be alright if we consider the fact you can't Normal Summon twice in one turn unless you use Double Summon or Ultimate Offering. Oh, you may be able to create a broken infinite combo with Ultimate Offering. "During the Battle Phase reveal your your hand to your opponent. Discard every non-Zombie-Type monster in your hand. This card loses 200 ATK for each monster discarded by this effect. Then you can discard any number of Zombie-Type monsters in your hand to increase this cards ATK for each monster discarded x200." I think this card is overpowered. It's a good beat stick and not hard to get out on the field since you can pitch it with Zombie Master then revive with Mezuki. It's also a good means to send Mezuki, Plaguespreader Zombie, and other key monsters into the Graveyard for free. It can fuel for Dark Armed Dragon or be used in Zombie World Hybrid decks to take advantage of its discarding capabilities. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 28, 2009 Report Share Posted December 28, 2009 Killey already pointed out all the OCG errors only Lorkad's effect is too dull, needs another one there's also the spelling and capitalization errors 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
green devil Posted December 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 29, 2009 thanks i've changed them now hope you like the changes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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