New Gemeni

[gravestone]

Here is my new Gemeni. Enjoy.

 

 

Lore: This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field or in the Graveyard. While this card is face-up on the field, you can Normal Summon it to have it be treated as an Effect Monster with this effect:

. During your main phase, you may tribute this monster and send 1 monster from your hand to the graveyard to summon 1 "Phoenix Gearfried" from your hand in face up ATK position. It is treated as an effect monster.

[-DOOM]

could you post the lore? i can read it but I can check the OCG better then

[Metal Skull]

@Doom

Press Crl and + on your Keyboard, it looks better

 

tribute=Tribute

may = can

Nice OCG other that i pointed out

Effect is pretty boring, no creativity

Pic is cool :D

I will give you a 8/10 cause you're new

[-DOOM]

@Plasma

lol i know that, but if i want to correct his OCG it is much easier when he posts the lore!

[gravestone]

Lore Added

[Metal Skull]

Oh you want the lore to copy paste adn then correct!!!

Sorry i tough you needed to see the lore better

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@gravestone

LOL the His World song link on your sig is to buy it!!

Just use a youtube link.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3VHnFwVskl0

Or if you want this:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AcUFFDBTyms&feature=related

[-DOOM]

his card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field or in the Graveyard. While this card is face-up on the field, you can Normal Summon it to have it be treated as an Effect Monster with this effect:

. During your main phase, you can tribute this monster and discard 1 monster Special Summon 1 "Phoenix Gearfried" from your hand. The Summoned monster is treated as an Effect Monster, and gains its effect.

 

hope this s correct.

Nice support for Gearfried;] pic is ok, 8,5/10

[Krokosaurus]

This card is not OPed, it fits into the new structure deck and the pic is good. The OCG errors are already corrected, so 8.5/10

[Namo™]

Lore fix:

This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field or in the Graveyard. While this card is face-up on the field, you can Normal Summon it to have it be treated as an Effect Monster with this effect:

. During your Main Phase, you can tribute this monster and send 1 monster from your hand to the Graveyard to summon 1 "Phoenix Gearfried" from your hand in face-up Attack Position. The Special Summoned monster is treated as an Effect monster and gains it's effects.

[.:Incognito:.]

Meh 7/10 Kinda boring

[Kotaro]

For OCG, the first half is correct, the second part:

 

During your Main Phase, you can Tribute this monster and send 1 monster from your hand to the Graveyard to Special Summon 1 "Phoenix Gearfried" from your hand in face up Attack Position. It is treated as an Effect Monster and gains it's effects.

 

As other's have said, its sort of boring though it is balanced and the picture is ok. 6.5/10

[ragnarok1945]

nice Gearfried support

 

the effect is still a little on the dull side though, I'll give this 7/10