naruto110 Posted December 28, 2009 Report Share Posted December 28, 2009 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Incognito:. Posted December 28, 2009 Report Share Posted December 28, 2009 The pic has text in it's background and the background is bad. Dragon should be capitalized.Use periods and capitalize words >_< 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kotaro Posted December 28, 2009 Report Share Posted December 28, 2009 Its OP. Has the negate effect and an increase in atk effect, needs a drawback The first sentence I think is good OCG, second sentence: "Increase this card's ATK by 200 for each monster on your opponent's field." Pic is quite bad, overall 5.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bighope Posted December 28, 2009 Report Share Posted December 28, 2009 you dont need to make a second paragraph for the other effect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 28, 2009 Report Share Posted December 28, 2009 capitalization errors I see no drawbacks to this card at all, add some the picture isn't impressive either 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rusty Shovel Posted December 28, 2009 Report Share Posted December 28, 2009 OP'ed. Bad pic. Horrible OCG. .1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted December 29, 2009 Report Share Posted December 29, 2009 ITT: We have NO IDEA how to use CAPS. I'm not even going to bother with the OCG fix. Read some other cards and figure it out. I hate the picture, and I hate Dragons more. It's overpowered for it's ATK gain effect, then again, it's useless if your opponent knows how to own you with one card. Try again.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brittle Ice Posted December 29, 2009 Report Share Posted December 29, 2009 Once per turn, your opponent's next attack is negated. For each monster your opponent controls, this card gains 200 ATK. That's the correct OCG.The picture is really bad. You shouldn't capitalize the whole name.The card itself is quite OP'd. Cyber Barrier Dragon needs Attack Reflector Unit, 1 Cyber Dragon and it needs to be in Attack Position in order to do just the first part of your effect. Also, it is a Level 6 monster, but your card has only 4 stars and can increase it's ATK, as well. 3 / 10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Krokosaurus Posted December 29, 2009 Report Share Posted December 29, 2009 OCG failed and the pic is also not good.2.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Akumakagemaru Posted December 29, 2009 Report Share Posted December 29, 2009 Good idea, not so good application. Needs drawbacks, weakening, OCG fixes, and more, though I'm sure you know that by now. 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arcadiz Posted December 29, 2009 Report Share Posted December 29, 2009 Horrible...*_* -/10 Waiting for a second try... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kytho Posted December 29, 2009 Report Share Posted December 29, 2009 you could add something to this card like, "Decrease the ATK of this card by 200 points for each spell and trap card you control." it can work ^.^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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