New Winged Beast

[Kotaro]

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Each time an opponent's monster is destroyed by battle, place 1 Divine Counter on this card (max. 2). By removing 2 Divine Counters from this card, you can destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card on the field or you can Special Summon 1 "Divine Token" (Winged Beast-Type/WIND/Level 1/ATK 1200/DEF 1500) in Defense Position. Each time a Divine Counter is removed from this card, you must send 2 cards from the top of your Deck to the Graveyard. Each time your opponent declares an attack on this card, you can remove 1 Divine Counter from this card to switch your opponent's attack target to the "Divine Token".

 

Any OCG errors, point it them out. Also, I think it is OP but what do you think?

 

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[ragnarok1945]

I think Divine Counter needs to have quotes around them

 

"Each time your opponent declares an attack on this card" I think can be changed to "Each time this card is attacked"

 

9/10

 

PS Did you get my PM to you?

[Kotaro]

Counter's dont need quotes around them, only the tokens need them.

 

I think either of them work, I will just wait to see if anyone else points that out.

 

Thanks for rating and comment.

 

Yes, I did, I forgot to reply, if that is what you were waiting for

[ragnarok1945]

*shrugs* I've seen some cards when quotes around them, others I have not, so I'm still not sure about that part of the OCG (I've just seen more in the former case)

 

And yes I am still waiting for a response when you're ready

[Kotaro]

Spell counters in this card are not quoted so that's why I usually dont put quotes.

http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Skilled_White_Magician

[.Leo]

OCG Fix.

 

Each time an opponent's monster is destroyed by battle, place 1 Divine Counter on this card (Max. 2). By removing 2 Divine Counters from this card, you can destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card on the field or you can Special Summon 1 "Divine Token" (Winged Beast-Type/WIND/Level 1/ATK 200/DEF 400) in face up Defense Position. Each time a Divine Counter is removed from this card, you must send 3 cards from the top of your Deck to the Graveyard. Each time your opponent targets this card to attack, you can remove 1 Divine Counter from this card to switch your opponent's attack target a "Divine Token" you control.[/Code]

 

Seems interesting.

 

Maybe make the Token Limit 4. Makes it more usable.

 

~9/10~

[Dr. Percival Cox]

Nice card it would be good support for a few decks....

9/9.5

[Kotaro]

@Leo:Thanks Leo, I forgot about putting the face up bit, but shouldnt it be face-up? For the bit within the last sentene, I think you could add "to a "Divine Token" that you control".

 

@Raver:It would help in defense of life points for practically any deck, and thank you for rating and comment.

[Dr. Percival Cox]

@Leo:Thanks Leo' date=' I forgot about putting the face up bit, but shouldnt it be face[b']-[/b]up? For the bit within the last sentene, I think you could add "to a "Divine Token" that you control".

 

@Raver:It would help in defense of life points for practically any deck, and thank you for rating and comment.

If the card said anything about Divine Heros It would be good support for my set.

[Monkey]

I would beef up your Divine Token... it's too weak for the time it takes to get one out.

 

Reduce the count from 3 to 2, it seems a little too insane for LS's when you can mill 3 cards per counter.

[Kotaro]

@Raver:Well when I made the card, I didnt know you had Divine hero's ;)

 

@Monkey:At first, it looked OP so I added in those drawbacks, I guess I weakened it too much. I will do changes tomorow when I get back on. Thanks for your comment.

[Kotaro]

And a bump.

[◎Kaleidoscope]

Really original effect, if this card was real i'd run it. Epic, where'd you find it?

[Kotaro]

Thanks, rating?

 

I found it on the internet ;).

 

I cant remember, I got it a few months ago and saved it on my laptop but I never used it until now.

[Kotaro]

BUMP

 

I would like some more comments please.

[Ghost Ryder]

OCG Fix.

 

Each time an opponent's monster is destroyed by battle, place 1 Divine Counter on this card (Max. 2). By removing 2 Divine Counters from this card, you can destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card on the field or you can Special Summon 1 "Divine Token" (Winged Beast-Type/WIND/Level 1/ATK 200/DEF 400) in face-up Defense Position. Each time a Divine Counter is removed from this card, you must send 3 cards from the top of your Deck to the Graveyard. Each time your opponent targets this card to attack, you can remove 1 Divine Counter from this card to switch your opponent's attack target a "Divine Token" you control.[/Code]

Seems interesting.

 

Maybe make the Token Limit 4. Makes it more usable.

 

~9/10~

Fix'd. I prefer face-up thanks D: M isn't capitalized in max.

 

Each time an opponent's monster destroyed by battle' date=' place 1 Divine Counter on this card (max. 2). By removing 2 Divine Counters from this card, you can [b']select[/b] 1 Spell or Trap Card on the field [b]and destroy it[/b] OR you can Special Summon 1 "Divine Token" (Winged Beast-Type/WIND/Level 1/ATK 200/DEF 400) [b]in face-up[/b] Defense Position. Each time a Divine Counter is removed from this card, [s]you must[/s] send 3 cards from the top of your Deck to the Graveyard. Each time [b]your opponent selects this card as an attack target[/b], you can remove 1 Divine Counter from this card to switch your opponent's attack target [b]to[/b] a "Divine Token" you control.

 

Not sure about the you must bit. I think mine is correct. Like the card, especially the picture. 9/10

[Bassa]

Very good card Ko. Love the pic and the effect 10/10

[Kotaro]

Thanks Daco, I wasnt sure if to put "you must" but put it in anyway.

 

Thanks Bassa2 for your comments and ratings :)

[Bassa]

no problem Kotaro! :)

[Alexis Rhodes]

Nice picture *wink wink*

 

And a good effect 8/10:)

[Kotaro]

Thanks 5D, I like the picture as well, if only I remembered where I got it from. Thanks for rating.

[jack781217]

I was hoping this is a Harpie support, but guess not T.T

Useful effect, thought the milling part is a little out of theme to me

8/10

[Kotaro]

I was just trying something different. Thanks for your input and rating.

[PokeMaster Calvin]

fantastic. 10/10

[GHawk]

Very nice card. Where did you get that image? OCG errors but they have already been pointed out.

 

9/10