I Made This Card 'Cause Wolves Are Cool

[Aequitas]

[align=center]This is my second card, and my first monster I've created. This is sort of an experiment, because I may build a small archtype off of this card, but I want to see other's opinions first. Also, I don't think the OCG is good with this card, so fixes for it would help.

 

 

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During your Standby Phase, you can place this card from your hand to the top of your Graveyard. As long as this card remains the top card of your Graveyard, all monsters sent from either field to the Graveyard are returned to their controller's Deck instead. All Spell and Trap Cards that are sent from the field to the Graveyard are removed from play instead. If this card is not on the top of your Graveyard, remove it from play and inflict 1000 points to both players.

 

 

 

 

Thanks for Father Wolf for awesome image.

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[ragnarok1945]

A shame it only has 1400 atk for a lv7, maybe raise that a little higher

 

what do you mean by on top of your Graveyard?

 

8/10

[Aequitas]

When I mean on top of your Graveyard, it would be the same thing as on the top of your Deck, only in this case, the card is face-up, of course. It isn't treated as discarding just like picking cards up from your deck isn't treated as drawing.

 

Its attack is low because its effect is what it is supposed to be used for, and it would then be overpowered because I could just reborn it, and I'll have a level 8 3000 attack monster from nothing. And it is level eight, so it can be trade in bait.

 

Thanks for the rating anyway.

[jack781217]

And it can also be searched by Shining Angel with 1400 ATK, can't it?

I don't see why you should discard it only during Standby Phase though, unless would introduce some major drawbacks in your set.

[Neo-MasterX]

Isn't that card posted twice?

[Aequitas]

And it can also be searched by Shining Angel with 1400 ATK' date=' can't it?

I don't see why you should discard it only during Standby Phase though, unless would introduce some major drawbacks in your set.

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Ah yes, I just put the Standby Phase in there because I felt like it. And yes, I didn't realize this, but it can be searched by Shining Angel. Dunno why one would do this, but yes.

 

 

Isn't that card posted twice?

 

I changed the title, that's all.

[~Wright~]

Best card I've ever seen from a new member. :) The OCG is flawless, except a few minor mistakes.

 

During your Standby Phase, you can place this card from your hand to the top of your Graveyard send this card to the Graveyard. As long as this card remains the top card of your Graveyard, all monsters sent from either the field to the Graveyard are returned to their controller's owner's Deck instead. All Spell and Trap Cards that are sent from the field to the Graveyard are removed from play instead. If this card is not on the top of your Graveyard, remove it from play and inflict 1000 points to both players.

 

You don't need to say it's sent to the top of your Graveyard, because if it goes to the Graveyard period, it goes to the top anyway.

 

I don't really see a point to the card though, and it doesn't seem very playable. As was said earlier, it's searchable by shining angel, but other than that, it is very hard to summon. Maybe you should make a summoning condition for it. Also, you lose a card when you put it on the top of your Graveyard, so maybe you should add an effect that lets you draw when you put it there.

[Aequitas]

Thanks for the advice, and I'll keep that in mind. When (or if) I make a set around this card, I'll give it some use.

[Wanderley]

credit Father Wolf for the image

[Aequitas]

credit Father Wolf for the image

 

There you go.