bluefire1179 Posted December 30, 2009 Report Share Posted December 30, 2009 I found this pic and it really jumped out at me. Hope you enjoy it. Effect:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 3 cards with "Forbidden One" in their names and removing two Machine-Type monsters in your Graveyard from play. This card cannot be selected as an attack target. This card is unaffected by Monster Effects. If the controller of this card has less than two cards in their Hand at any time, this card is removed from play. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
COLS Posted December 30, 2009 Report Share Posted December 30, 2009 I would correct your OCG, but there aren't any errors. you might want to change it to 'this card cannot be targeted in battle'. just a suggestion. i like the pic, the effect is very well thought through. congratulations, you made another exodia card. 9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
£>-ShådøwBøx-<3 Posted December 30, 2009 Report Share Posted December 30, 2009 Exodia, the Forbidden One is actually the Torso and Head, so this'll be way to easy to Summon. Maybe instead of: "sending two Machine-Type monsters from your Hand to the Graveyard." It could be removing 2 Machine-Type in the Graveyard from play. and not by sending "Exodia, the Forbidden One" it could be sending all the pieces from your hand to the graveyard, it would be listed as "Left Leg of the Forbidden One" and so on... Correct that and i'll give a full rating, but so far its a 5/10 MY OCG IS NOT TO BE CORRECTED!!! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted December 30, 2009 Report Share Posted December 30, 2009 This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing one face-up "Exodia the Forbidden One" and sending two Machine-Type monsters from your Hand to the Graveyard. This card cannot be selected as an attack target. This card is unaffected by Monster Effects. If the controller of this card has less than two cards in their Hand at any time' date=' this card is removed from play.[/quote'] ilu Card Destruction and Shrink. <3 God. Another Exodia. I hate him almost as much as Dragons. Any way, this card is somewhat balanced. I stressed the somewhat part because it's hanging on the scale of overpowered. I'd change the Machine materials to being on the field. Meh.7.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bluefire1179 Posted December 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 30, 2009 Edited. Check it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
£>-ShådøwBøx-<3 Posted December 30, 2009 Report Share Posted December 30, 2009 THERE YO:U GO!!!!!! !10/10 Tiz Beh Sow Awsum I Fergawt Hau Tew Spel PLUS A REP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted December 30, 2009 Report Share Posted December 30, 2009 Removing is spelled wrong. And now this card is even EASIER to get out.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 30, 2009 Report Share Posted December 30, 2009 you misspelled removing in the card text this card is too easy to summon to the field yes it's also easy to remove it from play, but exodia decks are built for card drawing, so I don't see that happening as easily 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bluefire1179 Posted December 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 30, 2009 sorry, typo. I tried to make it more support for a Machine deck then Exodia. Anyway, I edited it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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