archie17 Posted December 30, 2009 Report Share Posted December 30, 2009 1st Edition Secret Rare version My first attempt at a Secret Rare. The length of the Lore was hard to squeeze in. If you got any ideas of how to shorten it, I'm open to suggestion. This card can only be Tribute Summoned by offering 1 Psychic-Type monster you control. When this card is Summoned, add 5 Movement Counters to it and place this card in the following Card Zone by the amount of Movement Counters on it: •5: Your Spell/Trap Card Zone.•4: Your Monster Card Zone. •3: Your opponent’s Monster Card Zone. •2: Your opponent’s Spell/Trap Card Zone. •1: Your opponent’s hand. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, remove 1 Movement Counter from this card. While this card is in a Spell/Trap Card Zone it is treated as a Continuous Spell Card and cannot be destroyed by the effects of Spells or Traps. While in a Monster Card Zone this card is treated as an Effect Monster and is unaffected by the effects of Effect Monsters and cannot be destroyed by battle. If all Card Zones are occupied, destroy any 1 card so this card can occupy the appropriate Card Zone. When this card is added to your opponent’s hand, all Movement Counters are removed from this card and your opponent must discard all other cards in his/her hand and reduce his/her Life Points x 1000 for every card he/she discarded. SCENARIOS-----------------------------------------------------------------------THE STRIKE EFFECTBEST CASE SCENARIO- Your opponent has no Monster Removal Spell Card while it’s in your Monster Card Zone.- You control a 4000 ATK monster and attack this card while it’s in your opponent’s Monster Card Zone causing 4000 worth of Direct Damage to his/her Life Points.- Your opponent has 6 cards in his hand when this card is added to your opponent’s hand, causing your opponent to discard all 6 cards except this card to the Graveyard and causing 6000 worth of Damage to your opponent’s Life Points, winning you the duel.--- OR ---- If you opponent does not have 6 cards in his hand but instead only 3, you cause 3000 worth of Damage and he/she must discard the 3 cards and will only have this card remain in his/her hand.- BUT your opponent can not use this card because he/she doesn’t have a single Psychic-Type monster in his/her Deck. Making this card useless to your opponent.--- AND ---- You activate Exchange since you already know whats in your opponent’s hand and take the card back to re-use all over again. THE GUTTERBALL EFFECTWORSE CASE SCENARIO- You Summon this card while your Spell/Trap Card Zone is full, you must destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card so you can place this card in a Card Zone, then…- Your Monster Card Zone is also full, so you must destroy 1 Monster Card so you can place this card in a Card Zone.- Your opponent controls a 4000 ATK monster and declares an attack on this card, causing you 4000 worth of Direct Damage to your Life Points.- This card is finally added to your opponent’s hand, but your opponent had no cards in his hand at that time, so he/she does not have to discard any cards therefore does not lose any Life Points.- In addition, your opponent has a Psychic-Themed Deck and can now use this card against you. HOW TO STOP THE UNSTOPPABLE- There is only 1 general way to stop this card and it’s by magic only. What that means is your only chance to stop this card is through Spell or Trap cards when this monster is treated as an Effect Monster in a Monster Card Zone. What you can do is use a simple monster removal card or a counter removal card or a tribute removal card. - The potential damage this card can cause is theoretically 5000 to maybe 6000 worth of Damage in addition to an entire hand discarded. - What makes this card so devastating is, once it does reach into your opponent’s hand, if your opponent does not have any Psychic-Type monster to play in his/her Deck, then he/she cannot use this card against you, and will probably eventually just discard it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 30, 2009 Report Share Posted December 30, 2009 that is one REALLY long effect, took me a while to read through it all but you explained it afterwards so it made it easy. And I feel it's balanced, so I'll give it 9.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Smeagle Posted December 30, 2009 Report Share Posted December 30, 2009 One of the most original effects I have ever seen. Bravo. 10/10. + Rep. Etc. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
archie17 Posted December 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 30, 2009 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Namo™ Posted December 30, 2009 Report Share Posted December 30, 2009 Question:This card is finally added to your opponent’s hand' date=' but your opponent had no cards in his hand at that time, so he/she does not have to discard any cards therefore does not lose any Life Points.[/quote'] your card's effect states that your opponent discards ALL cards in his hand and therefore will discard this card and inflict 1000 points of damage, other than that this card is EPIC 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
archie17 Posted December 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 30, 2009 Question:This card is finally added to your opponent’s hand' date=' but your opponent had no cards in his hand at that time, so he/she does not have to discard any cards therefore does not lose any Life Points.[/quote'] your card's effect states that your opponent discards ALL cards in his hand and therefore will discard this card and inflict 1000 points of damage, other than that this card is EPIC 9.5/10 No, it states discard all other cards, not including this card, and they lose 1000 LP x the amount of cards discarded, so that could reach up to 6000 if you opponent has a full hand or it could be 0 if you opponent has no cards in his hand. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Namo™ Posted December 30, 2009 Report Share Posted December 30, 2009 Question:This card is finally added to your opponent’s hand' date=' but your opponent had no cards in his hand at that time, so he/she does not have to discard any cards therefore does not lose any Life Points.[/quote'] your card's effect states that your opponent discards ALL cards in his hand and therefore will discard this card and inflict 1000 points of damage, other than that this card is EPIC 9.5/10 No, it states discard all other cards, not including this card, and they lose 1000 LP x the amount of cards discarded, so that could reach up to 6000 if you opponent has a full hand or it could be 0 if you opponent has no cards in his hand. dang my eyes and their eye movement copacity (W/e lol) well in that case its still 9.5/10 because some of the wording seems off to me, but that's just me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
archie17 Posted December 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 30, 2009 Question:This card is finally added to your opponent’s hand' date=' but your opponent had no cards in his hand at that time, so he/she does not have to discard any cards therefore does not lose any Life Points.[/quote'] your card's effect states that your opponent discards ALL cards in his hand and therefore will discard this card and inflict 1000 points of damage, other than that this card is EPIC 9.5/10 No, it states discard all other cards, not including this card, and they lose 1000 LP x the amount of cards discarded, so that could reach up to 6000 if you opponent has a full hand or it could be 0 if you opponent has no cards in his hand. dang my eyes and their eye movement copacity (W/e lol) well in that case its still 9.5/10 because some of the wording seems off to me, but that's just meI get what your saying, its a long effect kinda, and the wording gets iffy towards the end, but not sure there really is that much of a better way to word it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phanax Leminer Posted December 30, 2009 Report Share Posted December 30, 2009 Aiku: GIANT LADY! 8DPhanax: >_> (...) OCG: Some minor errors.offering = Tributingdestroy any 1 card= destroy 1 card Effect: Mouvement indeed. The card moves like it was alive and it's well showed. However, I believe that 1 monster to tribute isn't enough. Maybe 2. As for the monster, it's REALLY STRONG! Good thing that you manage to balance it with it's ATK and all. Image and Name: The image is just great. I like it and the name too. Very fits. Congratulations. Overall: 9.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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