Necronian Empire - Exodus {3/???}

[Akumakagemaru]

Another booster pack, these are just a few samples. Please rate.

 

 

Lore: When a Monster is destroyed as a result of battle, place 1 Necro Counter on this card. Once per turn, you may Special Summon a "Necronian" monster from your Graveyard by removing a number of Necro Counters from this card equal to the Level of the selected monster divided by 3 (Rounded up). This card cannot be Special Summoned from the Graveyard.

 

 

Lore: When a monster is destroyed, place 2 Necro Counters on this card. Once per turn, you may Special Summon 1 "Necronian" monster from your Hand, Deck, or Graveyard by removing Necro Counters equal to the selected monster's Level. The monster is destroyed during the End Phase of your next Turn. This monster cannot be Special Summoned from the Graveyard.

 

 

Lore: When this card is Special Summoned by the effect of a "Necronian" card, increase its ATK by 600.

[ragnarok1945]

with the divided by 3 for counters on the first card, you rarely see that being used for counters before. However, the effect is still just for special summoning, give it another effect.

 

Thus your first two cards have way too similar effects, differ them a little bit. In addition, the 2nd card needs specific summoning requirements due to such high atk. If you don't want to, then lower the atk down to 3000.

 

7.8/10

[Akumakagemaru]

Thanks for the input.

 

First card: I wanted to be different, and the Special Summoning will be the entire basis of the Necronian cards. get a Lord out, and use him to Special Summon the troops, using fallen Necronians to keep fueling the effect.

 

Second card: I figurd that between needing to get the exact level, and destroying the monster at the end of your next turn, that would limit his power. He's intended to be one of - if not THE - strongest Necronian available.

 

I may change them later though, I'll need to make the others and see how they fit in, I think.

 

Anyways, thanks again for the input.