Vampire Angel-Exiled

[scandulinia]

Okay i think this card is one of my better cards so far, comment and rate please.

 

Lore: This card is also treated as a Fairy-Type monster. When this card is successfully Summoned, Tribute 1 monster you control or destroy this card. During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent. Once per turn, you can pay 2000 Life Points to increase the ATK and DEF of this card by 1000, until the end of the turn.

[賢狼ホロ]

Dual types are written as a one Type + "This card is also treated as a X-Type monster.", I think. You must add "you control" to the sentence about a tribute, otherwise you can tribute a monster your opponent controls.

Instead of the summoning condition, why not make it level 5 instead? : /

 

[spoiler=Corrected OCG (I think :3)]

This card is also treated as a Fairy-Type monster. When this card is successfully Summoned, Tribute 1 monster you control or destroy this card. During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent. Once per turn, you can pay 2000 Life Points to increase the ATK and DEF of this card by 1000, until the end of the turn.

 

 

 

I do not think this card is especially interesting. Needs a tribute, piercing damage and can increase its ATK and DEF for a cost. It is like a Saber Beetle with a equip card. : |

[ragnarok1945]

don't put BOTH types

 

write just 1, then say in the text it's also treated as the other type

 

And with the summoning condition it's much easier if you simply made this lv5

 

8.3/10

[Kotaro]

As said above, take Fairy of its types and could be a Level 5.

 

The effect is kinda UP IMO, paying that much life points for one turn and the tribute/destroy effect.

 

OCG looks good but was also corrected and the pic is blurry. ]

 

Good for someone new, 8/10