150th POST!! Dark Mech Hunters

[bluefire1179]

Hey all, so I'm using my 150th post to unveil some cards: the Dark Mech Hunters!

I have 3 monsters, 3 support. The support are pretty simple-minded. What I'm really looking for is critique on the monsters.

The idea behind these guys is high-ATK, low-DEF, with ATK altering, or attack number altering effects, sa well small damage effects when they are removed from the field, depending on how they are removed.

Enjoy.

 

Tiraanus Alpha Lore:

"Dark Mech Hunter Shadowbomb" + 1 or more non-Tuner DARK monsters

This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Synchro Summon. This card can attack twice per turn. If it does, this card may not attack during your next turn. If this card is destroyed by battle, inflict 600 damage on your opponent. If this card is destroyed by a card effect, inflict 800 damage on your opponent. If this card is removed from play, you take 400 damage.

Dark Mech Hunter images credit goes to HP Doom. He makes awesome pics.

 

Mech Hunter's Pitfall Lore:

You can only activate this card while there are at least 2 "Dark Mech Hunter" cards in your Graveyard or removed from play. If your opponent Summons a monster with at least 1000 ATK, destroy the Summoned monster. If it was an Effect Monster, inflict 500 damage to your opponent. If it was a Normal Monster, you take 500 damage. If it was a Fusion or Sunchro Monster, inflict 1000 damage to your opponent. If it was a Ritual Monster, inclict 700 damage to both players.

Image credit for Spells and Traps - found on Deviant Art.

[Archwing]

I like the whole diffrent effects based on how its destroyed thing. 9/10 And Congrats on your 150th post.

[ragnarok1945]

impressive pictures as always

 

your OCG for them seems to look solid

 

your synchro is the only one that needs a slight drawback, a little TOO OPed right there

 

9/10

[bluefire1179]

ah, I see. ok. will edit.

 

and thanks

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updated Tiraanus 2.0 - changed last sentence, reduced ATK and damage effects.

[Metal Skull]

Monsters pics are cool

Spell pics are bad :/

Effects are ok and impressive OCG

The Synchro is OP'ed but that's allright IMO

9/10

[bluefire1179]

thanks

[ragnarok1945]

ah' date=' I see. ok. will edit.

 

and thanks[hr']

updated Tiraanus 2.0 - changed last sentence, reduced ATK and damage effects.

 

yeah now it looks much better, so I'll raise my rate to 9.5/10

[.area51player.]

Really impressive pics on the monsters.

On the spells they are ok, though not that great.

Solid OCG...

I like them.

Congrats, anyway ;)

[bluefire1179]

thanks very much

 

others?

[bluefire1179]

bump

[Aequitas]

Solid cards.

 

Mainly all OCG corrections have been made, above. So, there really isn't much to say.

 

9/10. Congrats.

[adrianator]

I would say you are a Pro card maker, you should teach me your skill.

[bluefire1179]

haha thanks.