Twin Seed Posted December 31, 2009 Report Share Posted December 31, 2009 All images are from Father Wolf's custom image archive unless stated otherwise. There is no real point to the Order archtype, they're just meant to be deadly. MONSTERS [spoiler=Order Pheonix Warrior] 1 Warrior-Type Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monster(s)Once per turn, you can discard 1 card from your hand to remove from play 1 card in your Graveyard. During your next Standby Phase, you can Tribute this card and pay 800 Life Points to destroy all Monster Cards on your opponent's field. You cannot conduct your Battle Phase during the turn this effect is activated. [spoiler=Order Ninja LV 3] When this card is Special Summoned, you can remove it from play to increase the ATK of 1 monster you control by half of the ATK of this card OR decrease the ATK of 1 monster your opponent controls by the same amount. You can permanently decrease the ATK of this card by 500 to ATK your opponents Life Points directly. [spoiler=Order Ice Mage] You can decrease this card's Level by 1 to increase the Level of 1 card you control by 1. [spoiler=Hell's Order Assassin] This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card return's to it's owner's hand during the End Phase of the turn it is Normal Summoned or flipped face-up. You can pay 1000 Life Points to equip 1 Equip Card from your deck or Graveyard to this card. SPELLS [spoiler=Summoning Order Circle] You can remove from play 1 monster in your Graveyard to Special Summon 1 Level 4 or Lower "Order" monster from your hand or deck. TRAPS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twin Seed Posted December 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 31, 2009 Your fix is wrong. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted December 31, 2009 Report Share Posted December 31, 2009 Once per turn, you can discard 1 card to remove from place 1 card in your Graveyard. During your next Stand-By Phase, you can Tribute this card to destroy all Monster Card(s) on your opponent's field. OCG Fix: "Once per turn, you can discard 1 card from you hand, to remove from placeplay 1 card in your Graveyard. During your next Stand-ByStandby Phase, you can Tribute this card to destroy all Monster Card(s) on your opponent's field." It unbalanced. Tributing this card isnt a big enough Drawback for that effect. You could have a RDA or SDD on your field or both and using this cards effect will decimate your opponents field of monsters and leave them open for a direct attack. I suggest LP payment and no battle phase on the turn it's activated. 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twin Seed Posted December 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 31, 2009 What's RDA and SDD? Good point, I'll add another draw back and fix the OCG. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted December 31, 2009 Report Share Posted December 31, 2009 OCG Fix: "Once per turn' date=' you can discard 1 card [b']from you hand,[/b] to remove from placeplay 1 card in your Graveyard. During your next Stand-ByStandby Phase, you can Tribute this card to destroy all Monsters Card(s) on your opponent's field." Slight fix on the fix. So you're dropping a monster in your Graveyard, then your next turn your dropping this card into the Graveyard to nuke your opponent's monsters? It would be better if you made it to where you can tribute it your opponent's Standby Phase, that way, they have a chance to pick up to balance this card out. Meh.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twin Seed Posted December 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 31, 2009 It's Monster Cards, not Monsters; even if it was, monster's itself isn't capatilized. It's ok as is, you can tribute during your turn. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted December 31, 2009 Report Share Posted December 31, 2009 It's Monster Cards' date=' not Monsters; even if it was, monster's itself isn't capatilized. It's ok as is, you can tribute during your turn.[/quote'] Could've sworn it was monsters. Aw well lol. I didn't see the drawback added so I assumed it could work.I can raise my rate for the balance now. 8D8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted December 31, 2009 Report Share Posted December 31, 2009 Actually Zeon's got it right it can be Monster Cards or monsters But this is infinitly more balanced than before since your opponent now has a chance to get back on their feet. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XP_Lulz Posted December 31, 2009 Report Share Posted December 31, 2009 It's Monster Cards' date=' not Monsters; even if it was, monster's itself isn't capatilized. It's ok as is, you can tribute during your turn.[/quote'] It's monsters, but your right, no caps. It's OK, a little OPed, but ok. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twin Seed Posted January 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 1, 2010 The last time I made a Synchro, I was told that they're supposed to be a little OPed, was that wrong? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted January 1, 2010 Report Share Posted January 1, 2010 No. Im not sure about anyone else but when I'm talking about synchro's I think of Synchro balance, not the normal kind of balance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twin Seed Posted January 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 1, 2010 Synchro balance is different than normal how? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 1, 2010 Report Share Posted January 1, 2010 LLD already corrected the OCG for destroying all your opponent's monsters, you should also adding in a LP pay of like 500 LP or something to balance it for your synchro the 2nd one is much more balanced out because the atk gain may be perm, but the card's atk is low enough 7.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twin Seed Posted January 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 1, 2010 If you mean the last sentence in the 2nd one, he loses 500 attack. EDIT:Fixed the first card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twin Seed Posted January 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 2, 2010 Bump. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twin Seed Posted January 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 2, 2010 Bump, what's wrong with the 1st post? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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