GHawk Posted January 1, 2010 Report Share Posted January 1, 2010 [align=center]Well, this is my newest card. Enjoy :) Lore:This card is treated as a Machine-Type monster while it is on your field or in your Graveyard. If this card destroys a Defense Position monster by battle, it can attack once again during the same Battle Phase. If this card is targeted by a Spell or Trap Card, you can pay 1000 Life Points to negate the effect of that card and destroy it. While this card is in your Graveyard, increase the ATK and DEF of all Machine-Type monsters on the field by 500.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bluefire1179 Posted January 1, 2010 Report Share Posted January 1, 2010 LOVELY pic. really nice. It's a bit OPed. I can see it running rampant on a field. I like the Graveyard effect though, very original. So 9/10. needs a bit more drawback, and/or sacling down Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GHawk Posted January 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 1, 2010 Yeah, thats happens with most of my cards. The get a little OP'd. I can't help it, it just happens. Thanks for the comment :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kotaro Posted January 1, 2010 Report Share Posted January 1, 2010 Yeah, it is quite OP, but a useable effect. Just needs 1 or 2 drawbacks to balance it out. The last bit could decrease the DEF by 500 maybe. No OCG errors and I like the pic, 9.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GHawk Posted January 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 1, 2010 Would it make it less OP'd if I made the last part only increase by 300? Thanks Kotaro! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alexis Rhodes Posted January 1, 2010 Report Share Posted January 1, 2010 Good picture like the effect and overall a very good card 9/10:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GHawk Posted January 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 1, 2010 Thank you! :o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kotaro Posted January 1, 2010 Report Share Posted January 1, 2010 Would it make it less OP'd if I made the last part only increase by 300? Thanks Kotaro! :DYes, I think it would make the card's less OP, but to balance it, a drawback would be needed although it can only be activated while in the graveyard could be considered a drawback as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GHawk Posted January 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 1, 2010 Okay, and I added it like that as a drawback because I couldn't think of anything else. Because if its removed from play, being in your hand and Deck also being on the field the Machine-Type monster wouldn't gain the extra boost they do when this card is in the Graveyard. :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 1, 2010 Report Share Posted January 1, 2010 excellent picture, though not the first time I've seen it the OCG looks fine, though for the last effect you should have made it effect warriors and machines after all, it IS both types in the same card 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dream Posted January 2, 2010 Report Share Posted January 2, 2010 There are a few OCG errors, but very minor ones. I'm not sure about the wording of the 2nd sentence...Drop its ATK and DEF down a few notches, and I reckon it'd be perfect!8.643326947362946329439264/9.5694259493574693654963547 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.area51player. Posted January 2, 2010 Report Share Posted January 2, 2010 Epin pic.I likeh the effect, it's great ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Percival Cox Posted January 2, 2010 Report Share Posted January 2, 2010 It's good 8/9.5Why are people overusing JazinKay's pics?Another card Yusei's deck can run. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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