Neil Moffatt Posted January 2, 2010 Report Share Posted January 2, 2010 OK, I have NEVER made a Synchro before and personally, I'm not too fond of them. But, I decided it was time for a change, so rate, hate, love and comment, whatever you see fit. Peace.[spoiler=Shadow Force Dusk Daedra] 1 DARK Tuner + 1 or more Non-Tuner MonstersWhen this card is Synchro Summoned, destroy all non-DARK Monsters on the field. When this card destroys a monster by Battle, remove from play the top card of your opponent's deck. Your opponent then draws the next card in their deck and adds it to their hand. During each of your End Phases you must show your hand to your opponent. [spoiler=Holy Beacon Dawn Paladin]1 LIGHT Tuner + 1 or more Non-Tuner monstersWhen this card attacks a DARK monster, it is destroyed and removed from play, ignoring damage calculation. If this card destroys a monster in battle, gain 200 Life Points x the destroyed monster's Level. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted January 2, 2010 Report Share Posted January 2, 2010 Pic seems a bit blurry...Effect looks good but OCG needs work, check the OCG thread.6.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vyoung44 Posted January 2, 2010 Report Share Posted January 2, 2010 Kinda OPed...needs a drawback...7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neil Moffatt Posted January 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 2, 2010 Thanks. Like I said, never made a Synchro so I need to work on it a bit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Dark Megacyber Posted January 2, 2010 Report Share Posted January 2, 2010 OP'ed, that's all. 6.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neil Moffatt Posted January 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 2, 2010 OK, how do you suggest changing it to make it balanced? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Mad Hatter Posted January 2, 2010 Report Share Posted January 2, 2010 OCG Fix:1 DARK Tuner + 1 or more Non-Tuner MonstersWhen this card is Synchro Summoned, destroy all non-DARK Monsters on the field. When this card destroys a monster by Battle, remove from play the top card of your opponent's deck. Your opponent then draws the next card in their deck and adds it to their hand. During each of your End Phases you must show your hand to your opponent. Somewhat OPed, however because you didn't day "While this card is face-up on the field" that means that even in the Graveyard you must show your hand to your opponent. That evens it out a bit. Good,Pic,Effect,Balance Bad,OCG Overall 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bgeren907 Posted January 2, 2010 Report Share Posted January 2, 2010 op'd... maybe make a cost like "when this card is summoned, pay 2000 life points to destroy all non-dark monsters on the field. WHen this card destroys an opponents monster by battle and sends it to the graveyard, rfp the top card of ur opponents deck. Then, add the top card of your opponent's deck to your hand. Your opponent draws 3 cards. Your opponent can look at your hand and set cards whenever they ask. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Percival Cox Posted January 2, 2010 Report Share Posted January 2, 2010 OCG is the only major thing wrong here 8/9.5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neil Moffatt Posted January 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 2, 2010 Thanks, all of you, but in the OCG correction Mad Hatter, you overlooked something that bgeren saw and tried to correct. That's what I'm worried makes it SERIOUSLY bad. You add the drawn card to YOUR hand, not your opponent's. Is that actually a proper effect? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Mad Hatter Posted January 2, 2010 Report Share Posted January 2, 2010 BWONG!In that case I drop my rating to 5/10!Stupidly OPed! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted January 2, 2010 Report Share Posted January 2, 2010 OCG is fixed Good effect 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hollow Ichigo! Posted January 2, 2010 Report Share Posted January 2, 2010 its actuallly pretty sweet good job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neil Moffatt Posted January 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 2, 2010 Then, Hatter, how do you suggest making it better and are Synchros not SUPPOSED to be ridiculously Overpowered? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hollow Ichigo! Posted January 2, 2010 Report Share Posted January 2, 2010 they can but not normally Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neil Moffatt Posted January 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 2, 2010 Every time I've seen a Synchro on the forums, they've been Overpowered and people say that''s OK. That's my reference, so sorry if I'm wrong. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hollow Ichigo! Posted January 2, 2010 Report Share Posted January 2, 2010 o well thats a good point you go on creating oped syncs and i will be there to tell you its okay Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neil Moffatt Posted January 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 2, 2010 Huh, at the moment, this is a one-time project, so for now, don't expect more. Well, it needs an opposite........ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hollow Ichigo! Posted January 2, 2010 Report Share Posted January 2, 2010 make a dark sync Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neil Moffatt Posted January 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 2, 2010 If I did that, THIS would be the Dark Synchro. I'm talking about a Holy Beacon Synchro (you probably have no idea what I'm talking about, so check out my cards. Chaos Destruction's the set). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hollow Ichigo! Posted January 2, 2010 Report Share Posted January 2, 2010 thats a good idea Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neil Moffatt Posted January 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 3, 2010 Second Synchro added. Even worse, I think this one is bland.BUMPCan no-one check my second card? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neil Moffatt Posted January 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 3, 2010 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Des ＨＥＲＯ Posted January 3, 2010 Report Share Posted January 3, 2010 One suggestion that you could ignore.When you say 1 dark tuner since it's a normal synchro summon could you put 1 dark attribute tuner because some people might mistake it for dark synchro monster.Except for that it's ok 8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neil Moffatt Posted January 4, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 4, 2010 OK, correct me if I'm wrong (I'm a noob to Synchros) but doest a Dark Tuner only have the D capitalised? If I'm wrong, just say so. But thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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