DarthSuhail Posted January 3, 2010 Report Share Posted January 3, 2010 Been quite a while since the last the time I made a card, forgive me for any OCG mistakes and help me to correct them and make this card better. The image wouldnt show so Il put it in spoiler thing.[align=center]When this card is Summoned, Special Summon 1 Tuner monster from your Deck. During the End Phase this card was Summoned, send this card to the Graveyard. Once per turn, you can discard 1 card from your hand to change this card's Level.[/align] [spoiler=Card Image]Credit to GSalvador for the image from DeviantART[/align] Thanks. Remember to comment & Rate ^_^. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon God Posted January 3, 2010 Report Share Posted January 3, 2010 The only OCG error is see is that you forgot to capitalize the G in Graveyard. other than that 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DOOM Posted January 3, 2010 Report Share Posted January 3, 2010 Why don't you add the image to the card >_< "Once per turn, you can discard 1 card from your hand to change the level of this card....... by which amount? ATK is too high for a level 1 monster, other han that card is ok. 7,5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.area51player. Posted January 3, 2010 Report Share Posted January 3, 2010 When this card is Summoned, Special Summon 1 Tuner monster from your Deck. During the End Phase this card was Summoned, send this card to the Graveyard. Once per turn, you can discard 1 card from your hand to change this card's Level. Nice card, I'd say.Pic seems great, but it'd shrink and get a bit blurry on the card.Change the ATK, it's too high for a lvl 1.;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
adrianator Posted January 3, 2010 Report Share Posted January 3, 2010 Good card but it seems to OP for a one star monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarthSuhail Posted January 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 3, 2010 Picture wouldnt go on the Card... summit wrong with it... Il change the OCG errors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DOOM Posted January 3, 2010 Report Share Posted January 3, 2010 it goes on the card, you just have to crop it O_o i added a gold sticker AND fixed the "bottom cutted off error" lol:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarthSuhail Posted January 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 3, 2010 it goes on the card' date=' you just have to crop it O_o i added a gold sticker AND fixed the "bottom cutted off error" lol:D[/quote'] Hey, thanks. I just uploaded it again... Sorry :oops: with the OCG corrected... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.area51player. Posted January 3, 2010 Report Share Posted January 3, 2010 Now it's much better, IMO ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted January 3, 2010 Report Share Posted January 3, 2010 Pic should be more concentrated on the creature, like Doom did.Effect is short but nicehOCG isn't bad.Name is...stupid?8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarthSuhail Posted January 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 3, 2010 Pic should be more concentrated on the creature' date=' like Doom did.Effect is short but nicehOCG isn't bad.Name is...stupid?8/10[/quote'] Well then... Give me another name then!BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted January 3, 2010 Report Share Posted January 3, 2010 Name is ok, but you need to use other pic if you want to use that name. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarthSuhail Posted January 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 3, 2010 I thought it fitted since hes turning into a beast thing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted January 3, 2010 Report Share Posted January 3, 2010 Yeah...Maybe i'm just confused ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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