Aequitas Posted January 3, 2010 Report Share Posted January 3, 2010 [align=center] Oh my God, I made a short(er) effect. If you browse some of my previous made cards, you'll see they have long, complicated effects. Well, not this one. It has a short(er) effect. [spoiler=Effect]When this card is drawn, you can return it to your Deck to draw 2 cards. When this card is Normal Summoned, you can send it to your Graveyard to add 2 "Copy Daemon" from your Deck to your hand. If you activate this effect, any time you Summon a "Copy Daemon" inflict 1000 points to both players. Hope you like. Image by Father Wolf.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.area51player. Posted January 3, 2010 Report Share Posted January 3, 2010 Finally a short effect ;)Seems pretty creative and balanced.Niceh pic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted January 3, 2010 Report Share Posted January 3, 2010 Effect is ok, pic is ok, ok OCGShort effect, but usable8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aequitas Posted January 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 3, 2010 Finally a short effect ;)Seems pretty creative and balanced.Niceh pic. Thanks. ^_^ Thought I'll change things up. Effect is ok' date=' pic is ok, ok OCGShort effect, but usable8/10[/quote'] Thanks for the rate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
adrianator Posted January 3, 2010 Report Share Posted January 3, 2010 Good card 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aequitas Posted January 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 3, 2010 Good card 9.5/10 Thanks for the rate. Short and sweet, I see. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StratoCast Posted January 3, 2010 Report Share Posted January 3, 2010 Wow I love this card's effect. It's just amazing. This is the first card I have seen of yours (I'm new). And it looks great. Awesome pic too (It's just a little different from official cards). 9/10 EDIT: the word summon should only be capitalized when talking about a specific summon, like Special Summon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aequitas Posted January 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 3, 2010 Wow I love this card's effect. It's just amazing. This is the first card I have seen of yours (I'm new). And it looks great. Awesome pic too (It's just a little different from official cards). 9/10 EDIT: the word summon should only be capitalized when talking about a specific summon' date=' like Special Summon.[/quote'] I'm not sure about that, I'll look it up. But thanks for the review. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted January 3, 2010 Report Share Posted January 3, 2010 If you return it to the deck, it is naturally returned to the top of the deck, so you would be drawing it again, therefore being able to activate it's effect again. Make it return to the bottom of the deck. ;) Name doesn't suit. :| Also a bit Op'ed. :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aequitas Posted January 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 3, 2010 If you return it to the deck' date=' it is naturally returned to the top of the deck, so you would be drawing it again, therefore being able to activate it's effect again. Make it return to the bottom of the deck. ;) Name doesn't suit. :| Also a bit Op'ed. :([/quote'] Generally, when a card is returned to the deck, the deck is shuffled. "The deck is shuffled" is just omitted in recent cards, cause any reasonable person can assume you shuffle the deck. I gues you can't. The name isn't the greatest, I will admit that. I based it around its ability to send it to the Graveyard in order to add 2 to your hand, thus "copying" it. The OP'edness is depateable. Thanks for the comments. There is a lot of stuff I need to keep in my mind when making my next card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Zoilus~ Posted January 3, 2010 Report Share Posted January 3, 2010 Awsome pic......to lazy ATM to read effect(jk nice effect) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twin Seed Posted January 3, 2010 Report Share Posted January 3, 2010 "When you draw this card...." instead of "When this card is drawn....."That's the only mistake I saw, good effect and pic. I liked your long effects better though, they're what inspired me :/ 9.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rusty Shovel Posted January 3, 2010 Report Share Posted January 3, 2010 Overused pic.OCG is ok.Balanced.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted January 3, 2010 Report Share Posted January 3, 2010 If you return it to the deck' date=' it is naturally returned to the top of the deck, so you would be drawing it again, therefore being able to activate it's effect again. Make it return to the bottom of the deck. ;) Name doesn't suit. :| Also a bit Op'ed. :([/quote'] Generally, when a card is returned to the deck, the deck is shuffled. "The deck is shuffled" is just omitted in recent cards, cause any reasonable person can assume you shuffle the deck. I gues you can't. ORLLY? I'm not sure, but I'll take your word for it. The name isn't the greatest, I will admit that. I based it around its ability to send it to the Graveyard in order to add 2 to your hand, thus "copying" it. I guess, but it's a stretch. The OP'edness is depateable. I think you mean...debatable? Or is is debateable? Anyways, it is a bit OP'ed. maybe just Special Summon 1 when it's sent to the Graveyard for a Synchro Summon. It is pretty balanced, though. Thanks for the comments. There is a lot of stuff I need to keep in my mind when making my next card. You're welcome. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aequitas Posted January 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 3, 2010 If you return it to the deck' date=' it is naturally returned to the top of the deck, so you would be drawing it again, therefore being able to activate it's effect again. Make it return to the bottom of the deck. ;) Name doesn't suit. :| Also a bit Op'ed. :([/quote'] Generally, when a card is returned to the deck, the deck is shuffled. "The deck is shuffled" is just omitted in recent cards, cause any reasonable person can assume you shuffle the deck. I gues you can't. ORLLY? I'm not sure, but I'll take your word for it. The name isn't the greatest, I will admit that. I based it around its ability to send it to the Graveyard in order to add 2 to your hand, thus "copying" it. I guess, but it's a stretch. The OP'edness is depateable. I think you mean...debatable? Or is is debateable? Anyways, it is a bit OP'ed. maybe just Special Summon 1 when it's sent to the Graveyard for a Synchro Summon. It is pretty balanced, though. Thanks for the comments. There is a lot of stuff I need to keep in my mind when making my next card. You're welcome. ^_^ Sorry for the misspelling. Kinda tired. Overused pic. I wouldn't know. Oh' date=' and just because Father Wolf made it doesn't mean it is overused. >_>[/b']OCG is ok. Thanks Balanced. Thanks 6/10 Let's see, my OCG is okay, my card is balanced, yet you drop it 3 points just because of a overused pic? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted January 3, 2010 Report Share Posted January 3, 2010 IDK where that came from either. ~_~ Anyways, I couldn't spell debateable/debatable either, so don't worry about it. I don't see this pis used too often anymore. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StratoCast Posted January 3, 2010 Report Share Posted January 3, 2010 Nvm about the capitalized summon thing... I looked it up and I was wrong. I could have sworn I saw a card without summon capitalized. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aequitas Posted January 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 3, 2010 Nvm about the capitalized summon thing... I looked it up and I was wrong. I could have sworn I saw a card without summon capitalized. It's fine. I wasn't entirely sure, either. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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