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Just want some feedback. Please rate and state why!. Also I think there are a couple of OCG errors in the beginning of the effect but I'm not sure how to fix them.

 

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When a LIGHT monster is destroyed by battle or a DARK monster is Summoned place 1 Dark Counter on this card (max. 6). While this card remains face-up on your side of the field, any DARK monster that is sent to the Graveyard as a result of battle, is removed from play instead. Once per turn during your Main Phase, you can pay 1000 Life Points and remove 3 Dark Counters from this card to Special Summon one of your removed from play monsters that was removed from play by this card's effect. You do not place a counters on this card for monsters Special Summoned by this card's effect. Monsters Special Summoned this way can not attack the turn they are Special Summoned. When this card declares an attack, you must tribute one DARK monster that you control

 

 

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Gag. Dragons.

When a LIGHT monster is destroyed by battle or a DARK monster is Summoned place 1 Dark Counter on this card (max. 6). While this card remains face-up on your side of the field' date=' any DARK monster that is sent to the Graveyard as a result of battle, is removed from play instead. Once per turn during your Main Phase, you can pay 1000 Life Points and remove 3 Dark Counters from this card to Special Summon one of your monsters that were removed from play by this card's effect. You do not place a counters on this card for monsters Special Summoned by this card's effect. Monsters Special Summoned this way cannot attack the turn they are Special Summoned. When this card declares an attack, you must tribute one DARK monster that you control.[/quote']

 

Hmm...Maybe you should add Summoning Requirements? This card is a little powerful as a Level 9 with no requirements. Then again, I know nothing. Anyway, this card has a good amount of balance. But it's remove from play effect might be a negative part for you most of the time. Considering that most DARK decks run Dark Armed Dragon, and 3 monsters have to be in the Graveyard.

 

Meh.

8/10

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This is the new card effect.

 

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When a LIGHT monster is destroyed by battle or a DARK monster is Summoned place 1 Dark Counter on this card (max. 6). Once per turn during your Main Phase, you can pay 1000 Life Points and remove 3 Dark Counters from this card to Special Summon 1 level 4 or lower monster from your Graveyard. You do not place a counters on this card for monsters Special Summoned by this card's effect. Monsters Special Summoned this way cannot attack the turn they are Special Summoned. When this card declares an attack, you must tribute one DARK monster that you control.

 

 

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When a LIGHT monster is destroyed as a result of battle.

don't say by battle. say as a result of battle

 

8/10

 

No your wrong. Its by battle.

 

This card id decent a tab op'd and an overused pic.

 

But good for a new member. Maybe in the future if your having trouble with ocg go to the ocg thread

 

8.5/10

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Thanks for all of the feedback! I think I'm going to end here with the dragons (seems like they're looked down upon).

LOL!

Yes you realise that once you post one, it's only because dragons are most popular and easy to find images on the internet so anyone could find one.

 

But anyway back to the card. I like the pic, effect is long but its kinda balanced but it needs some sort of restriction as its a high level monster. still scores a solid 7.5/10

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"When a LIGHT monster is destroyed by battle or a DARK monster is Summoned place 1 Dark Counter on this card (max. 6). While this card remains face-up on your side of the field, any DARK monster that is sent to the Graveyard as a result of battle, is removed from play instead. Once per turn during your Main Phase, you can pay 1000 Life Points and remove 3 Dark Counters from this card to Special Summon one of your removed from play monsters that was removed from play by this card's effect (you do not place a counter on this card for a monster Special Summoned by this card's effect). Monsters Special Summoned in this way cannot attack during the turn they are Special Summoned. When this card declares an attack, you must Tribute one DARK monster that you control."

 

That was all I caught. Love the effect! 9/10

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