machine set/archetype

[duelistxynam]

This is my first forum post showing off cards. There might be a few grammar errors. More to come.

 

Any suggestions are accepted, but please if you must criticize please do so constructively.

 

Once per turn, if you control this monster on the field, you can equip it to a face-up "Cannon Soldier" monster, except "Cannon Soldier Prototype" on your side of the field as an Equip Card, OR unequip it and Special Summon it in face-up Attack Position. When equipped to a monster by this card's effect, that monster gains 600 ATK. During your Stand by phase after that monster is destroyed, this card is Special Summoned to the field with half of the ATK and DEF of the destroyed monser. This card is destroyed during the End Phase.

 

 

This monster can only be Normal Summoned or Set by tributing a "Cannon Soldier" monster you control. Once per turn, you can remove a level 5 or lower Machine-type monster from play and inflict damage equal to half of its ATK or DEF. This monster cannot attack the turn you activate this effect. During your Standby Phase, by sending this face-up card to the Graveyard, Special Summon 1 "Cannon Soldier MK-4" from your hand.

 

 

"Cannon Soldier MK-2" + "Cannon Soldier MK-3" or "Cannon Soldier MK-4"

Once per turn, you can equip this card with a Machine-type monster from your Graveyard and gain counters equal to the level of the equipped monster. (max. 10) If you Tribute to activate the effect of a "Cannon Soldier" monster you control, you can substitute the counters for a Tribute(s), if the number of counters is equal to or greater than the number of required Tribute(s).

 

"Cannon Soldier" + "Catapult Turtle"

This card can only be Special Summoned from your Extra Deck by sending the above cards from your hand or your side of the field to the Graveyard. (You do not use "Polymerization".) Once per turn, you can send a Level 4 or lower Machine-Type monster from your Deck to the Graveyard and inflict damage equal to its ATK if this card is in Attack Position or DEF if this card is in face-up Defense Position.

 

1 Machine-type Tuner + 1 "Cannol Soldier" monster

This card can be Synchro Summoned by removing the above cards from play from the Graveyard. If "Cannon Soldier Omega" is Synchro Summoned in this way, it is destroyed during the End Phase. Once per turn, ignore the tributing requirements for one "Cannon Soldier" monster on your field. This card cannot attack during the turn this effect is activated.

 

 

[Atomix]

For your first post, these are quiet good, if you haven't realised, their is two /'s on the first card's type. Also, your cards will not be insulted so much if the images have backgrounds ;)

[thecentaur]

Isn't there al ready a "Cannon Soldier" card and a "Cannon Soldier MK2" card? REAL card?

Yes there is, you tribute monsters and inflict damage to your opponent.

[Stan Alda]

They aren't the best, but they're good for a new member. Your OCG was acceptable, your pics were pretty good (I noticed the Mark V was the Metal Gear REX), and the effects weren't too bad.

 

I'll give you a 7.5/10, although I added .5 because my favorite type is Machine.

[GHawk]

I have to say this. For the images, you should make sure they have backgrounds. It makes the cards look better. The OCG and Gammer is a little off (if you wat me to fix them PM me and I'll get to them). Other than that the cards seem pretty balanced to me.

 

8/10

[.area51player.]

Images w/out background = fail

The pics are nice, but would be better with backgrounds.

Don't like long effects, but it pass. OCG is a bit off, check the OCG Thread and you will improve easily.

I won't fix the effects, they are too long .>.

[duelistxynam]

Isn't there al ready a "Cannon Soldier" card and a "Cannon Soldier MK2" card? REAL card?

Yes there is' date=' you tribute monsters and inflict damage to your opponent.

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That was the entire basis of my inspiration for this set: to build on the Cannon Soldier family.