Mindscatter Posted January 3, 2010 Report Share Posted January 3, 2010 A new Archetype I am creating, though I will only post 1 card today. These are supposed to be really strong monsters that somewhat have to do with halving your Life Points. [spoiler=Monsters][spoiler=Lore (Misty Death Knight)]Halve your Life Points to have this card attack. During a Battle Phase in which this card attacks, your opponent cannot activate any Spells and Trap cards. Monsters this card destroys by battle are removed from play. If this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent, inflict 500 damage to your opponent. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Cσяiитнiαиσ² Posted January 3, 2010 Report Share Posted January 3, 2010 All on it seems good, but the pic...Not bad, but it is Wolverine.LoL, anyway, your card is good and has a short effect, the way I like them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuri Posted January 3, 2010 Report Share Posted January 3, 2010 change the pic but anyways pretty good card for the set Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dargon_Lexor Posted January 3, 2010 Report Share Posted January 3, 2010 The pic is okaythe card is over powered but it's bad too... well, i'll give you 3 stars Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Cσяiитнiαиσ² Posted January 3, 2010 Report Share Posted January 3, 2010 The pic is okaythe card is over powered but it's bad too... well' date=' i'll give you 3 stars[/quote'] Sorry, but how can it be Overpowered?It cannot attack directly AND your LP is halved each turn.lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DOOM Posted January 3, 2010 Report Share Posted January 3, 2010 first of all, pic is nice and OCG is fine. Effect is...... weird. Unstructured. Suggestions: Instead of "this card can attack 5 times", use "this card can attack all monsters your opponent controls once each" because 5 times can be very OP in combination with Final attack order or Creature Swap and Marshmellon, The Fool, Spirit Reaper etc. And you don't need "this card cannot deal piercing damage". well, i have to see more of them to rate the set properly Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Womi Posted January 3, 2010 Report Share Posted January 3, 2010 Pretty cool card.Three things, though:Did you mean WARwolf or WEREwolf?Do you mean piercing damage like attacking an Atk-Pos Monster with less ATK?That's Wolverine on the pic. You better change it. (played by Hugh Jackman in the movies, originally from X-Men by Marvel) 7.9/9.9 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mindscatter Posted January 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 3, 2010 first of all' date=' pic is nice and OCG is fine. Effect is...... weird. Unstructured. Suggestions: Instead of "this card can attack 5 times", use "this card can attack all monsters your opponent controls once each" because 5 times can be very OP in combination with Final attack order or Creature Swap and Marshmellon, The Fool, Spirit Reaper etc. And you don't need "this card cannot deal piercing damage". well, i have to see more of them to rate the set properly[/quote'] 1. Yes, I need "this card cannot deal piercing damage." otherwise it would OTK.2. No thank you. There is nothing wrong with my OCG. Your effect is completely different from what I want from this card. It IS supposed to attack 5 times, even if the opponent has less than 5 monsters. You will see why.Pretty cool card.Three things' date=' though:Did you mean WARwolf or WEREwolf?Do you mean piercing damage like attacking an Atk-Pos Monster with less ATK?That's Wolverine on the pic. You better change it. (played by Hugh Jackman in the movies, originally from X-Men by Marvel)[img']http://snarkerati.com/movie-news/files/2009/04/wolverine.jpg[/img] 7.9/9.9 Don't make yourself look gay. And yes, I DID mean warwolf. And I will make more warwolfs in the future.Image changed. Happy? I was supposed to use that for Overwhelmer, Full Warwolf, but meh. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DOOM Posted January 3, 2010 Report Share Posted January 3, 2010 first of all' date=' pic is nice and OCG is fine. Effect is...... weird. Unstructured. Suggestions: Instead of "this card can attack 5 times", use "this card can attack all monsters your opponent controls once each" because 5 times can be very OP in combination with Final attack order or Creature Swap and Marshmellon, The Fool, Spirit Reaper etc. And you don't need "this card cannot deal piercing damage". well, i have to see more of them to rate the set properly[/quote'] 1. Yes, I need "this card cannot deal piercing damage." otherwise it would OTK.2. No thank you. There is nothing wrong with my OCG. Your effect is completely different from what I want from this card. It IS supposed to attack 5 times, even if the opponent has less than 5 monsters. You will see why. 1. No it's not needed because you stated "if this card eals piercing damage, this card gains 400 ATK instead". Do you understand?2. I didn't complain about your OCG, i said it is fine. Basically I wanted to say "this card can attack 5 times" is OP. You can easily create an OTK if not a FTK with this card if you keep the 5 times. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted January 3, 2010 Report Share Posted January 3, 2010 The card doesn't shows for me...i'll look later... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archwing Posted January 3, 2010 Report Share Posted January 3, 2010 Its okay, Ive never been a fan of any Beast type cards but thats personal feelings so ill give it a 8.5/10 for being original...Kinda. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mindscatter Posted January 4, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 4, 2010 first of all' date=' pic is nice and OCG is fine. Effect is...... weird. Unstructured. Suggestions: Instead of "this card can attack 5 times", use "this card can attack all monsters your opponent controls once each" because 5 times can be very OP in combination with Final attack order or Creature Swap and Marshmellon, The Fool, Spirit Reaper etc. And you don't need "this card cannot deal piercing damage". well, i have to see more of them to rate the set properly[/quote'] 1. Yes, I need "this card cannot deal piercing damage." otherwise it would OTK.2. No thank you. There is nothing wrong with my OCG. Your effect is completely different from what I want from this card. It IS supposed to attack 5 times, even if the opponent has less than 5 monsters. You will see why. 1. No it's not needed because you stated "if this card eals piercing damage, this card gains 400 ATK instead". Do you understand?2. I didn't complain about your OCG, i said it is fine. Basically I wanted to say "this card can attack 5 times" is OP. You can easily create an OTK if not a FTK with this card if you keep the 5 times.ow, got 1. Being changed now...2. It's not my fault if my opponent is stupid enough to summon Marshmallon. And anyway, i lose half my Life Points, so we should be even nonetheless. But if you insist, I will reduce it to 4 attacks per turn... Added card 2. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DOOM Posted January 4, 2010 Report Share Posted January 4, 2010 first of all' date=' pic is nice and OCG is fine. Effect is...... weird. Unstructured. Suggestions: Instead of "this card can attack 5 times", use "this card can attack all monsters your opponent controls once each" because 5 times can be very OP in combination with Final attack order or Creature Swap and Marshmellon, The Fool, Spirit Reaper etc. And you don't need "this card cannot deal piercing damage". well, i have to see more of them to rate the set properly[/quote'] 1. Yes, I need "this card cannot deal piercing damage." otherwise it would OTK.2. No thank you. There is nothing wrong with my OCG. Your effect is completely different from what I want from this card. It IS supposed to attack 5 times, even if the opponent has less than 5 monsters. You will see why. 1. No it's not needed because you stated "if this card eals piercing damage, this card gains 400 ATK instead". Do you understand?2. I didn't complain about your OCG, i said it is fine. Basically I wanted to say "this card can attack 5 times" is OP. You can easily create an OTK if not a FTK with this card if you keep the 5 times.ow, got 1. Being changed now...2. It's not my fault if my opponent is stupid enough to summon Marshmallon. And anyway, i lose half my Life Points, so we should be even nonetheless. But if you insist, I will reduce it to 4 attacks per turn... Added card 2. 2.nd: you are able to make an OTK with marshmellon or the fool with this card and creature swap while your opponent controls 1 monster and you the fool and warwolf Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mindscatter Posted January 4, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 4, 2010 There are shorter OTK's. Also, there IS a real creature that can attack 3 times. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted January 4, 2010 Report Share Posted January 4, 2010 Not bad.The pics are good and the names are also.I'm not so shure about the OCG though.The halve effect makes the ballanced.A 8.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DOOM Posted January 4, 2010 Report Share Posted January 4, 2010 which? and how much ATK does it have? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Womi Posted January 4, 2010 Report Share Posted January 4, 2010 Yeah, the pic is cool.Don't feel offended, please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Coreander Posted January 4, 2010 Report Share Posted January 4, 2010 Art - nice.You should remove Misty from the name.Warwolf and Werewolf are both okay,but remove Half if you don't like Werewolf,to have "Overwhelmer - Warwolf" Effects - Misty Death Knight has a great effect.Warwolf too,but limit the attack number to 3. OCG - no errors that I see of with Warwolf.But Misty Death Knight :[spoiler=OCG fix]Halve your Life Points when this card declares an attack.Your opponent cannot activate any Spells and Trap cards during the Battle Phase in which this card attacks. Any monster this card destroys by battle is removed from the field (do you mean returned to hand,or removed from play?). Each time this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent, inflict 500 damage to your opponent. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted January 4, 2010 Report Share Posted January 4, 2010 Pics are mehish...Effects are good!OCG is fine...Seems good overall ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dargon_Lexor Posted January 4, 2010 Report Share Posted January 4, 2010 All on it seems good' date=' but the pic...Not bad, but it is Wolverine.LoL, anyway, your card is good and has a short effect, the way I like them.[/quote'] oh, each turn???????well i didnt look close enough sorryThe pic is okaythe card is over powered but it's bad too... well' date=' i'll give you 3 stars[/quote'] Sorry, but how can it be Overpowered?It cannot attack directly AND your LP is halved each turn.lol.dint look close enough Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mindscatter Posted January 4, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 4, 2010 which? and how much ATK does it have?http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Hydra_ViperArt - nice.You should remove Misty from the name.Warwolf and Werewolf are both okay' date='but remove Half if you don't like Werewolf,to have "Overwhelmer - Warwolf" Effects - Misty Death Knight has a great effect.Warwolf too,but limit the attack number to 3. OCG - no errors that I see of with Warwolf.But Misty Death Knight :[spoiler=OCG fix']Halve your Life Points when this card declares an attack.Your opponent cannot activate any Spells and Trap cards during the Battle Phase in which this card attacks. Any monster this card destroys by battle is removed from the field (do you mean returned to hand,or removed from play?). Each time this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent, inflict 500 damage to your opponent. 8/10Yeah, I was not paying attention and wrote "removed from the field" instead of "removed from play". All your other OCG corrections are wrong. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Coreander Posted January 4, 2010 Report Share Posted January 4, 2010 You sure? When I correct OCG I just write how I would put it.Both ways are right. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted January 4, 2010 Report Share Posted January 4, 2010 1st pic is cool2nd pic is bad...really badEffects are great and OCG seems ok IMOHalf Warwolf????No sense!Anyway 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mindscatter Posted January 5, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 5, 2010 ORLY? I like it. Card 3 posted. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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