1999gee Posted January 3, 2010 Report Share Posted January 3, 2010 Look at my cards. Please rate, reply and more. For every time your opponent losses life points you gain 500 life points.When "this card" is tribute summoned to the field it destroys any monster on the field.A pirate that got her hands on a fire weapon.When "this card" is summoned to the field, for every card in your opponent's hand you gain 1000 life points.Take one fire attribute monster from the graveyard and summon it to the field in attack mode. p.s. I will upload more soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aero~ Posted January 3, 2010 Report Share Posted January 3, 2010 bad OCGbad picspretty good for a new member.you can only have one type per card. just say in the text, "This card is also treatetd as a [inster type here] monster." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Smeagle Posted January 5, 2010 Report Share Posted January 5, 2010 The first card makes a loop with a card called Fire Princess that will kill your opponent in 1 turn, so you might wanna fix that. The second card should read "When this card is Tribute Summoned, destroy 1 card on the field." Third card is...well, it's a Normal Monster. Pic is bad, too. Fire Child's effect is too strong, make it like 500 a card. Fire Graveyard should say: "Special summon 1 FIRE monster from your Graveyard in Attack Position." Also, "this card" does not require quotes. Not horrible for a new member, but not good either. 5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted January 5, 2010 Report Share Posted January 5, 2010 pics are bad...Effects bland and OCG has allready been corrected...Sorry dude, those are bad... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
£>-ShådøwBøx-<3 Posted January 6, 2010 Report Share Posted January 6, 2010 OCG corrected, bad pics, NO need for quotes around "this card", sry 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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