MysticWater Posted January 4, 2010 Report Share Posted January 4, 2010 please comment :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeroke Posted January 4, 2010 Report Share Posted January 4, 2010 Needs some fixing: If your opponent has two or more monsters on the field than you, this card may attack your opponent directly. The Battle Damage is equal to half of the original ATK of this card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wilson1998 Posted January 4, 2010 Report Share Posted January 4, 2010 The effect and the attack and deffence are good for a new member.But I think the pic can be more better. 8\10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon God Posted January 4, 2010 Report Share Posted January 4, 2010 deacent for your first card 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MysticWater Posted January 4, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 4, 2010 Thanks everyone! And I'll fix it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SmallieBigs Posted January 4, 2010 Report Share Posted January 4, 2010 Needs some fixing: If your opponent has two or more monsters on the field than you' date=' this card can attack your opponent directly. The Battle Damage is equal to half of the original ATK of this card.[/quote'] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MysticWater Posted January 4, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 4, 2010 There, I fixed it. Thanks Zeroke :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lyfe. Posted January 4, 2010 Report Share Posted January 4, 2010 This is really good for a newb. Just one thing. The pic is overused.8/10Keep it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SmallieBigs Posted January 5, 2010 Report Share Posted January 5, 2010 It's can not may proper OCG makes you aweshum! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mackeyz Posted January 5, 2010 Report Share Posted January 5, 2010 oke dah klo begitu ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
isaacerpo Posted January 5, 2010 Report Share Posted January 5, 2010 needs alittle tweaking on its attack Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidepipe Posted January 5, 2010 Report Share Posted January 5, 2010 Very nice card for a newbie.Effect is fine, OCG is fine, just the pic is a bit.... you know, overused.8.5/10Keep up the good work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emerald Fan Posted January 5, 2010 Report Share Posted January 5, 2010 The OCG is wrong. It should read as such: "If your opponent controls at least 2 more monsters than you, this card can attack your opponent directly. If this card attacks this way, the Battle Damage is reduced by half."But otherwise, it is a good card. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DMZ Posted January 5, 2010 Report Share Posted January 5, 2010 The OCG is wrong. It should read as such: "If your opponent controls at least 2 more monsters than you' date=' this card can attack your opponent directly. [b']If this card attacks this way, the Battle Damage is reduced by half[/b]."But otherwise, it is a good card. 8/10That's not the same effect anymore. "The Battle Damage done by this card equals half its original ATK" is correct, as said in the first correction. The rest is fine.Card is good, but not very original 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rusty Shovel Posted January 5, 2010 Report Share Posted January 5, 2010 Good for a new member! Keep it up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dream Posted January 7, 2010 Report Share Posted January 7, 2010 This is really good for a newb. Just one thing. The pic is overused.8/10Keep it up. ^This. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted January 7, 2010 Report Share Posted January 7, 2010 If your opponent controls more 2 or more monsters than you, this card can attack your opponent directly. Any Battle Damage this card inflicts by this attack is equal to half this card's original ATK.Ocg correction is up^^Niceh for a new member but pic is getting overused...8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 14, 2010 Report Share Posted January 14, 2010 ShadowPlasma already corrected the OCG picture is overused, though the effect is reasonable for it 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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