GOD Machine

[Guest Zeonark]

[align=center]Not that Latin "God Out Of The Machine" name like everyone uses.

 

[spoiler=Lore]This monster cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by tributing 4 Machine-Type monsters you control including at least 1 Machine-Type Fusion monster. When this card is Summoned, destroy this card unless you discard 3 cards. This card can attack twice during the same Battle Phase. If this card would be destroyed, you can remove from play 1 Machine-Type monster from your Graveyard instead. Once per turn, you can remove from play 3 Machine-Type monsters from your Graveyard to have this card gain 1000 ATK until the end of this turn.

 

 

I think I'm the first to use Father Wolf's new image. xD Never mind. Apparently everyone on YCM has used this image. D:

 

I REALLY need to stop making DARK monsters. Anyway, this is a ridculous powerhouse. It's a 3000 ATK Double smasher that can gain 1000 MORE ATK if you just drop 3 Machines in your Grave. BUT, you have to have 3 cards just to complete it's summon, otherwise, you just wasted your time. Oh, and you better fuse a monster too.

 

...I think it's balanced...not sure. Someone help. OCG needs fixing.

 

...What? Expected more?

 

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[.area51player.]

Man I've seen this pic about 2 or 3 times before you using .>.

atleast = at least

Not sure, but I think summoned = Summoned.

Anyway, long effect sucks, but your card seems pretty cool.

[Guest Zeonark]

Man I've seen this pic about 2 or 3 times before you using .>.

atleast = at least

Not sure' date=' but I think summoned = Summoned.

Anyway, long effect sucks, but your card seems pretty cool.

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Quiet you. You have not seen it. Quit lying. D:< *Shot*

Thanks for the OCG fixes.

 

Long effects are cool. Especially for High level monsters that can eat your opponent for Breakfast. 8D

 

Thanks.

[Metal Skull]

You're like the 5th using this pic *_*

Anyway niceh effect, long, but cool

Pic is cool and OCG is ok

Go with what .Corinthiano said!

9/10

[-DOOM]

Overall, you did a good job with balancing IMO. The effect is understandable, a few OCG errors, but that's not worthy to be mentioned here. Pic was chosen wisely, it's an awesome one ^___^

Problem, only problem;] with this card is the length of the effect. From my points of view, remove 1 of the last 2 sentences, i would prefer the 1st to be removed.

overall good job, if you can keep makin this quality, never stop making DARK monsters!

[Guest Zeonark]

Overall' date=' you did a good job with balancing IMO. The effect is understandable, a few OCG errors, but that's not worthy to be mentioned here. Pic was chosen wisely, it's an awesome one ^___^

Problem, only problem;'] with this card is the length of the effect. From my points of view, remove 1 of the last 2 sentences, i would prefer the 1st to be removed.

overall good job, if you can keep makin this quality, never stop making DARK monsters!

 

Thanks. I thought it was overpowered.

Fix teh OCG you. D:<

Not really chosen wisely. Just looked into Father Wolf's updated Archives and nabbed it. *Shot*

 

Eh. I also hate it when the effect goes all shrink like that. Lol. But I'd rather keep that part. Because it makes it more of a super powered Machine.

 

Thanks. Lol. I'll think about it. xD

[-DOOM]

If you insist....^^:

This monster cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by tributing 4 Machine-Type monsters you control including at least 1 Machine-Type Fusion monster. When this card is Summoned, destroy this card unless you discard 3 cards. This card can attack twice during the same Battle Phase. Once per turn, if this card would be destroyed, you can remove from play 1 Machine-Type monster from your Graveyard instead. Once per turn, you can remove from play 3 Machine-Type monsters from your Graveyard to have this card gain 1000 ATK until the end of this turn.

[Lord Smeagle]

It's a Mechanical Obelisk. Which is cool. But it would've been cooler if we didn't have the real one. 9.4/10.

[Guest Zeonark]

It's a Mechanical Obelisk. Which is cool. But it would've been cooler if we didn't have the real one. 9.4/10.

 

Screw Obelisk. He can only stay out for one turn. This card uses it's teamm- er, SERVANTS to keep it alive. <3

 

Thanks for the rating. And HP, thanks for the OCG Fix.

[The_Prince_of_Death]

Man I like it. I would use this in a machine deck if I still had one. took it aprat and lost some of the cards...anyway, it is balanced though makes it hard to summon it with the tribute a fusion monster need along with the three card discard to keep it on the field. would be kind of hard. why not add this to it for the when it is summoned part: "destroy this at the end phase unless you discard three cards" that way it gives you time to get those cards or atleast attack with it. 10/10 long effects are great.

[Guest Zeonark]

Man I like it. I would use this in a machine deck if I still had one. took it aprat and lost some of the cards...anyway' date=' it is balanced though makes it hard to summon it with the tribute a fusion monster need along with the three card discard to keep it on the field. would be kind of hard. why not add this to it for the when it is summoned part: "destroy this at the end phase unless you discard three cards" that way it gives you time to get those cards or atleast attack with it. 10/10 long effects are great.

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Actually, then this card would be underpowered for it's Level and Requirements. You only have to Discard 3 cards once. If I fix it to that, it'll be hell to keep it on the field if you're still using extra cards.

 

Thanks for the rate Tom.

[The_Prince_of_Death]

Man I like it. I would use this in a machine deck if I still had one. took it aprat and lost some of the cards...anyway' date=' it is balanced though makes it hard to summon it with the tribute a fusion monster need along with the three card discard to keep it on the field. would be kind of hard. why not add this to it for the when it is summoned part: "destroy this at the end phase unless you discard three cards" that way it gives you time to get those cards or atleast attack with it. 10/10 long effects are great.

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Actually, then this card would be underpowered for it's Level and Requirements. You only have to Discard 3 cards once. If I fix it to that, it'll be hell to keep it on the field if you're still using extra cards.

 

Thanks for the rate Tom.

 

No actually for its level, the requiremtnets are too high though the effects make up for that. and you are welcome. and yes I understood it was a one time discard fee but it was as if it would be destroyed right away as soon as it was summoned and not at the end of the turn.

[Guest Zeonark]

Man I like it. I would use this in a machine deck if I still had one. took it aprat and lost some of the cards...anyway' date=' it is balanced though makes it hard to summon it with the tribute a fusion monster need along with the three card discard to keep it on the field. would be kind of hard. why not add this to it for the when it is summoned part: "destroy this at the end phase unless you discard three cards" that way it gives you time to get those cards or atleast attack with it. 10/10 long effects are great.

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Actually, then this card would be underpowered for it's Level and Requirements. You only have to Discard 3 cards once. If I fix it to that, it'll be hell to keep it on the field if you're still using extra cards.

 

Thanks for the rate Tom.

 

No actually for its level, the requiremtnets are too high though the effects make up for that. and you are welcome. and yes I understood it was a one time discard fee but it was as if it would be destroyed right away as soon as it was summoned and not at the end of the turn.

 

Hmm...Well I could make it for the End Phase the monster is summoned.

 

Would that work?