Metallica101 Posted January 5, 2010 Report Share Posted January 5, 2010 I haven't been on since i think July so give me some comments on how i can improve this card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aero~ Posted January 5, 2010 Report Share Posted January 5, 2010 lolocg.lolstarlevels.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon God Posted January 5, 2010 Report Share Posted January 5, 2010 This card can only be Tribute Summoned by Tributing 2 or more FIRE monsters that you control.and lower the level the thing isnt that strong Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metallica101 Posted January 6, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 6, 2010 remade level 9 now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aero~ Posted January 6, 2010 Report Share Posted January 6, 2010 no, it's not a ritual. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metallica101 Posted January 6, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 6, 2010 better? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SparkWyvren Posted January 6, 2010 Report Share Posted January 6, 2010 lolocg.lolstarlevels.atk/def3/10this ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aero~ Posted January 6, 2010 Report Share Posted January 6, 2010 still wrong. change lv to 8. This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by tributing 2 FIRE monsters you control. You cannot Normal Summon or Set the turn this card was Special Summoned. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metallica101 Posted January 6, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 6, 2010 i added two new effects Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.area51player. Posted January 6, 2010 Report Share Posted January 6, 2010 This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 2 FIRE monsters you control. This card cannot attack in the turn it was Special Summoned. The other I'm not sure I can. But it's pretty much saying that your own attacks will be redirected to this dragon? If I'm right... EDIT: This was my 888TH Post :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aero~ Posted January 6, 2010 Report Share Posted January 6, 2010 Monster Card, insead of monster-card. can>may Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metallica101 Posted January 6, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 6, 2010 This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 2 FIRE monsters you control. This card cannot attack in the turn it was Special Summoned. The other I'm not sure I can. But it's pretty much saying that your own attacks will be redirected to this dragon? If I'm right... EDIT: This was my 888TH Post :3 It's directing the opponents attacks to the dragon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.area51player. Posted January 6, 2010 Report Share Posted January 6, 2010 It says that this monster can be the target by monster cards attack.YOUR monsters are monster cards, right? So their attack will be redirected to the dragon, too.This is what I understood, at least. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metallica101 Posted January 6, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 6, 2010 i was thinking that when i made it but it took me a while to think of a way to phrase that without saying my own monsters attacks are directed towards it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aero~ Posted January 6, 2010 Report Share Posted January 6, 2010 This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by tributing to FIRE monsters you control. As long as this card is face- up on the field, your opponent can only select this card as an attack target. This card cannot attack the turn it was Summoned. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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.area51player. Posted January 6, 2010 Report Share Posted January 6, 2010 This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by tributing 2 FIRE monsters you control. As long as this card is face-up on the field' date=' your opponent can only select this card as an attack target. This card cannot attack in the turn it was [b']Special[/b] Summoned. Now it's right.Fix it.Oh, and the pic is overused. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted January 6, 2010 Report Share Posted January 6, 2010 OCG should be like this:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned exept by Tributing 2 FIRE monsters you control. Your opponent can only select this card as an attack target. This card cannot attack in the turn it was Special Summoned.Go with my correctionPic is ok, effects seems ok, OCG is bad5.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.area51player. Posted January 6, 2010 Report Share Posted January 6, 2010 OCG should be like this:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned exept by Tributing 2 FIRE monsters you control. Your opponent can only select this card as an attack target. This card cannot attack in the turn it was Special Summoned.Go with my correctionPic is ok' date=' effects seems ok, OCG is bad5.5/10[/quote'] Man, This card can only be Special Summoned by... and This card cannot be Special Summoned except.... is pretty much the same thing.You just changed it, it wasn't exactly a fix... AND it's except, not exept. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metallica101 Posted January 6, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 6, 2010 everybody happy? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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