kidwarrior77 Posted January 6, 2010 Report Share Posted January 6, 2010 Is my grammer better now! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lyfe. Posted January 6, 2010 Report Share Posted January 6, 2010 Learn proper capitalization. 1st card pic needs a background. 2nd card is a bit overpowered. 1st card should read:"Equip only to a Warrior-Type monster. The equipped monster loses 500 ATK, and cannot be destroyed by battle." 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon God Posted January 6, 2010 Report Share Posted January 6, 2010 This card can only be equipped to a Warrior-Type monster. The monster equipped with this card ATK is decreased by 500 and that card can not be destroyed as a result of battle. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kidwarrior77 Posted January 6, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 6, 2010 it's not like real cards aren't overpowered. since they are! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lyfe. Posted January 6, 2010 Report Share Posted January 6, 2010 it's not like real cards aren't overpowered. since they are!Do not get defensive over someone's opinion over the internet. We told it like it is. Just lower the DEF a bit and it would be fine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrabHelmet Posted January 6, 2010 Report Share Posted January 6, 2010 The first card is just Mist Body except much worse. The second card is just another generic vanilla with more power-creeping stats, but he's inferior to Neos Alius because E-Hero support is more valuable than 400 DEF. There is nothing of value here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted January 6, 2010 Report Share Posted January 6, 2010 Crabs, dont be a twat... We get enough of that from the OCGjerks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrabHelmet Posted January 6, 2010 Report Share Posted January 6, 2010 Crabs' date=' dont be a twat... We get enough of that from the OCGjerks.[/quote'] Balance is a vital part of card creation. The fact of the matter is that one of these cards is strictly inferior to an existing card, and another of these cards is both uninteresting (being a Normal Monster with no unique support) and compares very unfavorably to another existing card. OCG is just nonsense, but balance is the single most important aspect of what purports to be a realistic card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Waxing-Pathetic Posted January 6, 2010 Report Share Posted January 6, 2010 Maybe cap some of the sentences. Just a thought. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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