dehubbard13 Posted January 6, 2010 Report Share Posted January 6, 2010 bump....im getting the slightest wave of deyjavu Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 6, 2010 Report Share Posted January 6, 2010 endbringer isn't a real type, remove that part some capitalization errors (like normal summoned should be Normal Summoned, tributing should be Tributing, etc) a lot of short effects, but still reasonable for early cards 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azmodius Posted January 6, 2010 Report Share Posted January 6, 2010 Awful. Considering your new, 5.5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dehubbard13 Posted January 7, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 7, 2010 endbringer isn't a real type' date=' remove that part some capitalization errors (like normal summoned should be Normal Summoned, tributing should be Tributing, etc) a lot of short effects, but still reasonable for early cards 7/10[/quote']yeah i know. I sort of made it up.but if it looks better that way ill change it. Awful. Considering your new' date=' 5.5/10.[/quote']Can you please point out what's so awful about them.And please don't give this OGC error bullcrap. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZeroLuneth Posted January 7, 2010 Report Share Posted January 7, 2010 Your OCG is fine it's not supposed to be perfect, especially when you're new you need time to develop your skills and become truly good at it, when I look at cards I always look at OCG last because it's the least important part of the card. Your first monster is a normal monster,nothing wrong with that, but when there are Normal Monsters involved in a set it is a good idea to give them support. The second card is perfectly fine not much of an effect, which isn't bad because simple effects are the staples and the long effects are usually for cards that are more like the main point of a set, but it's not a bad idea to put long effect's on all your cards. The third cards I'd suggest that you weaken its effect a little, like it can't be destroyed by a monster whose attack is equal to its or maybe up to 2200, but when it's at 1500 there needs to be some sort of drawback. Okay for your first endbringer card you didn't mention who takes the damage which is a major thing to be left out and it's like a wave motion cannon that does damage every turn and when your monster is that strong it would extremely difficult to stop, I suggest that it only does 1000 at the end phase and it doesn't gain power. The second one is a bit powerful in ATK but for its effect to work it evens it out a bit but I still think that its ATK should drop down a few hundred points. The third one is over powered especially if you play swords, or you have threatening roars or wabokus, this card is just ridiculous its other effects are fine but the instant win is not. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dehubbard13 Posted January 8, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 8, 2010 god thank you.i know now what i need to improve on.ill fix them tomorrow. *yawn* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dehubbard13 Posted January 8, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 8, 2010 god thank you.i know now what i need to improve on.ill fix them tomorrow. *yawn* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dehubbard13 Posted January 8, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 8, 2010 god thank you.i know now what i need to improve on.ill fix them tomorrow. *yawn* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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