makelo Posted January 8, 2010 Report Share Posted January 8, 2010 Really, i speak spanish. If exist an error in the card's effect. correct them plz. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twenty-five Zero Oh-oh Posted January 8, 2010 Report Share Posted January 8, 2010 Welcome to YCM.Pic is nice. Card is also well balanced. You however may want to consider removing 1st edition because it is not properly capitalized when you use the card maker. OCG(official card grammar)Fix: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. When this card is Normal Summoned or Flip Summoned, you can draw 1 card. Then you can discard that card to remove 1 card in you opponent's Graveyard from play. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
usetheforcehan Posted January 8, 2010 Report Share Posted January 8, 2010 I will try to fix the OCGs. Pyro Red MachineThis cannot be Special Summoned. When this card is Summoned on your field, draw 1 card from your Deck. As long as this card remain on your field in Face-Up Position, draw 2 cards from your Deck during Draw Phase. When this card is destroyed, remove from play 1 card from your opponent Graveyard. A bit OP'd imo for drawing 2 card for each turn. Nerf it a bit. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mekaX Posted January 8, 2010 Report Share Posted January 8, 2010 cheak this out Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mekaX Posted January 8, 2010 Report Share Posted January 8, 2010 cheak this out Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mekaX Posted January 8, 2010 Report Share Posted January 8, 2010 cheak this out Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.area51player. Posted January 8, 2010 Report Share Posted January 8, 2010 This card cannot be Special Summoned. When this card is Special Summoned or Flip Summoned succesfully, you can draw 1 card. Once per turn, you can draw 1 card. You can discard the drawn card to remove 1 card from your opponent's Graveyard from play. Epic pic... I like the effect, very useful IMO.I would add some restriction, though, like : Once per turn you can draw 1 card. If the drawn card is a Level 4 or lower monster, you can discard it to remove 1 card form your opponent's Graveyard from play. Welcome to YCM, enjoy here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.area51player. Posted January 8, 2010 Report Share Posted January 8, 2010 This card cannot be Special Summoned. When this card is Special Summoned or Flip Summoned succesfully, you can draw 1 card. Once per turn, you can draw 1 card. You can discard the drawn card to remove 1 card from your opponent's Graveyard from play. Epic pic... I like the effect, very useful IMO.I would add some restriction, though, like : Once per turn you can draw 1 card. If the drawn card is a Level 4 or lower monster, you can discard it to remove 1 card form your opponent's Graveyard from play. Welcome to YCM, enjoy here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.area51player. Posted January 8, 2010 Report Share Posted January 8, 2010 This card cannot be Special Summoned. When this card is Special Summoned or Flip Summoned succesfully, you can draw 1 card. Once per turn, you can draw 1 card. You can discard the drawn card to remove 1 card from your opponent's Graveyard from play. Epic pic... I like the effect, very useful IMO.I would add some restriction, though, like : Once per turn you can draw 1 card. If the drawn card is a Level 4 or lower monster, you can discard it to remove 1 card form your opponent's Graveyard from play. Welcome to YCM, enjoy here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
guy22 Posted January 8, 2010 Report Share Posted January 8, 2010 meka x, dont spam i think its a really good card for a new member. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
guy22 Posted January 8, 2010 Report Share Posted January 8, 2010 meka x, dont spam i think its a really good card for a new member. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
guy22 Posted January 8, 2010 Report Share Posted January 8, 2010 meka x, dont spam i think its a really good card for a new member. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted January 8, 2010 Report Share Posted January 8, 2010 Post the effect so that i can correct OCGIt seems good IMOpic is awsome!Where did you found it?9/10 because you're new ;DBienvenido a YCMI can speak spanish xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted January 8, 2010 Report Share Posted January 8, 2010 Post the effect so that i can correct OCGIt seems good IMOpic is awsome!Where did you found it?9/10 because you're new ;DBienvenido a YCMI can speak spanish xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted January 8, 2010 Report Share Posted January 8, 2010 Post the effect so that i can correct OCGIt seems good IMOpic is awsome!Where did you found it?9/10 because you're new ;DBienvenido a YCMI can speak spanish xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brittle Ice Posted January 8, 2010 Report Share Posted January 8, 2010 This card cannot be Special Summoned. When this card is Special Summoned... Brilliant. This card cannot be Special Summoned. When this card is Summoned, you can draw 1 card from your Deck. Once per turn, you can draw 1 card from your Deck. By discarding the drawn card, you can remove from play 1 card from your opponent's Graveyard. Very nice image, OK name. It's ATK and DEF are too high for a Level 6 monster. I'd lower the DEF to 1000 or something like that. As for the effect, it's too much. Drawing 1 additional card per each turn is a huge advantage. If you want to balance things, you should add a limit to how many times the effect can be used or at least some activation cost. (for example, "Once per turn, you can pay 500 Life Points to draw 1 card from your Deck.")Maybe it would be a good idea to make the card unable to attack during the turn it used it's effect. 7 / 10 Nice job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brittle Ice Posted January 8, 2010 Report Share Posted January 8, 2010 This card cannot be Special Summoned. When this card is Special Summoned... Brilliant. This card cannot be Special Summoned. When this card is Summoned, you can draw 1 card from your Deck. Once per turn, you can draw 1 card from your Deck. By discarding the drawn card, you can remove from play 1 card from your opponent's Graveyard. Very nice image, OK name. It's ATK and DEF are too high for a Level 6 monster. I'd lower the DEF to 1000 or something like that. As for the effect, it's too much. Drawing 1 additional card per each turn is a huge advantage. If you want to balance things, you should add a limit to how many times the effect can be used or at least some activation cost. (for example, "Once per turn, you can pay 500 Life Points to draw 1 card from your Deck.")Maybe it would be a good idea to make the card unable to attack during the turn it used it's effect. 7 / 10 Nice job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brittle Ice Posted January 8, 2010 Report Share Posted January 8, 2010 This card cannot be Special Summoned. When this card is Special Summoned... Brilliant. This card cannot be Special Summoned. When this card is Summoned, you can draw 1 card from your Deck. Once per turn, you can draw 1 card from your Deck. By discarding the drawn card, you can remove from play 1 card from your opponent's Graveyard. Very nice image, OK name. It's ATK and DEF are too high for a Level 6 monster. I'd lower the DEF to 1000 or something like that. As for the effect, it's too much. Drawing 1 additional card per each turn is a huge advantage. If you want to balance things, you should add a limit to how many times the effect can be used or at least some activation cost. (for example, "Once per turn, you can pay 500 Life Points to draw 1 card from your Deck.")Maybe it would be a good idea to make the card unable to attack during the turn it used it's effect. 7 / 10 Nice job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.area51player. Posted January 8, 2010 Report Share Posted January 8, 2010 This card cannot be Special Summoned. When this card is Special Summoned... Brilliant. This card cannot be Special Summoned. When this card is Summoned, you can draw 1 card from your Deck. Once per turn, you can draw 1 card from your Deck. By discarding the drawn card, you can remove from play 1 card from your opponent's Graveyard. Very nice image' date=' OK name. It's ATK and DEF are too high for a Level 6 monster. I'd lower the DEF to 1000 or something like that. As for the effect, it's too much. Drawing 1 additional card per each turn is a huge advantage. If you want to balance things, you should add a limit to how many times the effect can be used or at least some activation cost. (for example, "Once per turn, you can pay 500 Life Points to draw 1 card from your Deck.")Maybe it would be a good idea to make the card unable to attack during the turn it used it's effect. 7 / 10 Nice job.[/quote'] Oh yeah, sorry, my bad.I see you like sarcasm. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.area51player. Posted January 8, 2010 Report Share Posted January 8, 2010 This card cannot be Special Summoned. When this card is Special Summoned... Brilliant. This card cannot be Special Summoned. When this card is Summoned, you can draw 1 card from your Deck. Once per turn, you can draw 1 card from your Deck. By discarding the drawn card, you can remove from play 1 card from your opponent's Graveyard. Very nice image' date=' OK name. It's ATK and DEF are too high for a Level 6 monster. I'd lower the DEF to 1000 or something like that. As for the effect, it's too much. Drawing 1 additional card per each turn is a huge advantage. If you want to balance things, you should add a limit to how many times the effect can be used or at least some activation cost. (for example, "Once per turn, you can pay 500 Life Points to draw 1 card from your Deck.")Maybe it would be a good idea to make the card unable to attack during the turn it used it's effect. 7 / 10 Nice job.[/quote'] Oh yeah, sorry, my bad.I see you like sarcasm. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.area51player. Posted January 8, 2010 Report Share Posted January 8, 2010 This card cannot be Special Summoned. When this card is Special Summoned... Brilliant. This card cannot be Special Summoned. When this card is Summoned, you can draw 1 card from your Deck. Once per turn, you can draw 1 card from your Deck. By discarding the drawn card, you can remove from play 1 card from your opponent's Graveyard. Very nice image' date=' OK name. It's ATK and DEF are too high for a Level 6 monster. I'd lower the DEF to 1000 or something like that. As for the effect, it's too much. Drawing 1 additional card per each turn is a huge advantage. If you want to balance things, you should add a limit to how many times the effect can be used or at least some activation cost. (for example, "Once per turn, you can pay 500 Life Points to draw 1 card from your Deck.")Maybe it would be a good idea to make the card unable to attack during the turn it used it's effect. 7 / 10 Nice job.[/quote'] Oh yeah, sorry, my bad.I see you like sarcasm. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mekaX Posted January 8, 2010 Report Share Posted January 8, 2010 me? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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ragnarok1945 Posted January 14, 2010 Report Share Posted January 14, 2010 capitalization errors, like special summoned and normal summoned should be Special Summoned and Normal Summoned the extra draw power needs a drawback to balance it out 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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