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This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing from play 1 Plant-Type monster and 1 Machine-Type monster from your side of the field. Once per turn, you can discard 1 Plant or Machine-Type monster to increase this card's ATK by 500 points until the End Phase.

 

Best I can do, but I don't know if it's completely correct. This card kinda underpowered. It's a two tribute monster with 2800 atk that has the ability to increase it's atk to 3300. There's already Super Conductor Tyranno which has 3300 atk. Compared to that, this is situational. Overall 8/10.

 

P.S. Increase it's atk!

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Great first card. keep it up!

 

This is what I was talking about in Icyblue's Interview thread.

 

 

Anyways:

 

This card is slightly OP with it's ATK gain effect since it will leave it with 3300 ATK. The OCG is good thanks to the fixes. To balance the effect I suggest decreasing the ATK to maybe 2400 or 2500 that way it'll end up being 2900 or 3000 ATK.

 

other then that its Ok, since it has minimal Originality.

 

7/10

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This card cannot be Special Summoned, except from your hand by removing from play 1 Plant-Type monster and 1 Machine-Type monster you control. Once per turn, by discarding 1 Plant or Machine-Type monster, this card gains 500 ATK until the End Phase.

 

Nice image, the name fits it.

The effect could be more original.

The summoning conditions are quite unusual. I doubt I've heard of a Deck that uses both Plants and Machines. (It's quite likely that I could be wrong, though)

But, since this is your first card, good job.

 

7 / 10

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