How does this look?

[mysticryan]

You know how Dark Magician has the ritual monster, Magician of Black Chaos. Well, I wanted Dark Magician Girl to have one also. So here she is. Tell me how she and her ritual look. Please.

 

This monster cannot be normal summoned or set. This monster can only be ritual summoned by Dark Magic Ritual, The Second. This monster gains 1000 attack points for every Dark Magician, Dark Magician Girl, and Magician of Black Chaos that has been removed from the game. Once per turn you must remove from play 1 monster with 2000 or more attack. If this monster cannot supply a monster to be sacraficed then it will be sent to the graveyard and the owner will lose 2000 Life Points. Every standby phase you gain 200 Life Points for every monster removed from play.

 

[bakupenguin]

umm, pic i overused but looks overall good.

[Sp1at]

OCG Fix

This monster cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This monster can only be Ritual Summoned by Dark Magic Ritual, The Second. This monster gains 1000 attack points for every Dark Magician, Dark Magician Girl, and Magician of Black Chaos that has been removed from the game. Once per turn you must remove from play 1 monster with 2000 or more attack. If this monster cannot supply a monster to be sacraficed then it will be sent to the graveyard and the owner will lose 2000 Life Points. Every standby phase you gain 200 Life Points for every monster removed from play.

 

OCG Fix

When Dark Magician Girl and a monster with 1000 or more ATK Points, tribute both monsters and Special Summon The Witch of Black Discord.

 

The Rest of it is fine

and not to OPed

7/10

[Masey 4 AVFC]

change the Ritual Spell Card it's wording is weird

[ragnarok1945]

some capitalization errors, like normal summoned or set should be Normal Summoned or Set

 

the 1000 atk gain is a bit too much since it has 2400 base atk already, I'd drop it to 500 atk, and make it lv8 instead for the monster

 

7.9/10