(-FATALITy-) Posted January 9, 2010 Report Share Posted January 9, 2010 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sugoroku Posted January 9, 2010 Report Share Posted January 9, 2010 This is a pretty sweet card! The only thing is, I dont think the word "offer" is used in the YGO card grammer. The right word should be "pay" but Im not sure so you dont have to take my advice. Anyway this card is an awesome 8/10! ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jasiek Posted January 9, 2010 Report Share Posted January 9, 2010 Yeah i agree, Sweet, wish i could do cards like that. 8.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ririkun Posted January 9, 2010 Report Share Posted January 9, 2010 I like the pic, but the effect is a bit wierd. It's not bad for your first card though. It's too Overpowered the way you wrote it since the second effect has no Limit to how many you can Special Summon. You also didn't list where it's coming from...so I'll just assume it's the graveyard. Change the last sentence to: "Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can pay 500 Life Points to Special Summon 1 Beast-type Monster from your graveyard." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
(-FATALITy-) Posted January 9, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 9, 2010 sorry. i meant to say you could only special summon 1. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ririkun Posted January 9, 2010 Report Share Posted January 9, 2010 It's okay. Just helping you to reword things. Though besides the fact you can only special summon 1, you also have to say where is the monster even coming from (deck, graveyard, etc) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flexh Posted January 9, 2010 Report Share Posted January 9, 2010 everything is good just give your picture a background Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Mad Hatter Posted January 9, 2010 Report Share Posted January 9, 2010 Is everyone who has posted here on crack? This card is terrible!The pic needs a background,The OCG (Original Card Grammar) is bad,Not to mention the effect is OPed (Over Powered)!Here is the OCG Fix:Once per turn, during your Standby Phase you can select 1 card in your opponent's hand and discard it to their Graveyard. Once per turn, during you Main Phase you can pay 500 Life Points to Special Summon 1 Beast-Type Monster from your Deck or Graveyard to your side of the field.Overall: 4/10With OCG fix: 6/10With OCG and better pic: 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jasiek Posted January 13, 2010 Report Share Posted January 13, 2010 Is everyone who has posted here on crack? This card is terrible!The pic needs a background' date='The OCG (Original Card Grammar) is bad,Not to mention the effect is OPed (Over Powered)!Here is the OCG Fix:Once per turn, during your Standby Phase you can select 1 card in your opponent's hand and discard it to their Graveyard. Once per turn, during you Main Phase you can pay 500 Life Points to Special Summon 1 Beast-Type Monster from your Deck or Graveyard to your side of the field.Overall: 4/10With OCG fix: 6/10With OCG and better pic: 8/10[/quote'] WOAH calm down, its not like KT or Konami are actually gonna publish these, but might aswell give your opinion. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 14, 2010 Report Share Posted January 14, 2010 I don't care for lack of backgrounds the OCG has been fixed already it's a little bit boring and dull in terms of effects, though balanced 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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