kktc guard Posted January 9, 2010 Report Share Posted January 9, 2010 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ririkun Posted January 9, 2010 Report Share Posted January 9, 2010 Nice, first of all props for making it WATER attribute, I love water cards. Getting that aside, here's OCG fixes for the card.1) Water has to be capital in the description, change Water to WATER.2) No need to put "types", just put the attribute (in this case WATER)3) Change "Once Per Turn", to "Once per turn", no need to capitalize all three. As for the effects, it's alright. A bit OP'ed because anyone can run it and it'sATK is high for a 7 star as it rivals "Dark Strike Fighter". Nothing too new, and theresalready a real card very similar to this called "Gungnir, Dragon of the Ice Barrier" that'sin Japan, which is also a 7 star and has the same effect except for the decrease ATK. Anyway, it's a decent card, but work on getting a better quality picture next time and make sure to make the final version of the card, I would recommend you to change the effect a little and make his ATK lower. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jazin Kay Posted January 9, 2010 Report Share Posted January 9, 2010 One thing I never do with Synchro Monsters I make is put rare/secret rare text on them. It's hard to see. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kktc guard Posted January 10, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 10, 2010 i like it though it makes it look cool Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 14, 2010 Report Share Posted January 14, 2010 some capitalization errors (like special summon should be Special Summon) water isn't a type, it's an attribute, so it should be WATER either that or just change it to aqua types 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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