spacerpg Posted January 9, 2010 Report Share Posted January 9, 2010 Check out my monster duo of cards called Majutsu Shi. (Magician in Japanese.) [spoiler=The Cards] Rate and enjoy! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ririkun Posted January 9, 2010 Report Share Posted January 9, 2010 actually its Majyutsu, haha but it's close enough, no need to be a perfectionist. you have a few ocg fixes, so change it to this: "When this card is Summoned, you may look at your opponent's hand. For every Spell cardthey have in their hand, you may draw 1 card from your deck. For every Trap card in their hand, your opponent gains 100 Life Points. For every Monster card in their hand, they lose 50 Life Points." Lol as for the effect, the Spell Card thing seems kind of broken and the Monster and Trapcard effects are really weak, 100 LP and 50 LP isn't really anything o,o 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
spacerpg Posted January 9, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 9, 2010 actually its Majyutsu' date=' haha but it's close enough, no need to be a perfectionist. you have a few ocg fixes, so change it to this: "When this card is Summoned, you may look at your opponent's hand. For every Spell cardthey have in their hand, you may draw 1 card from your deck. For every Trap card in their hand, your opponent gains 100 Life Points. For every Monster card in their hand, they lose 50 Life Points." Lol as for the effect, the Spell Card thing seems kind of broken and the Monster and Trapcard effects are really weak, 100 LP and 50 LP isn't really anything o,o 7/10[/quote'] Fixed your complaints. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alexis Rhodes Posted January 9, 2010 Report Share Posted January 9, 2010 50 points seems abit little maybe change it to 100 . Good pictures and ok effects but they could have better names 8/10:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flexh Posted January 9, 2010 Report Share Posted January 9, 2010 Alright i thought they would be better as spell cards but that is my opinion 7/10 1st one 8/10 2nd one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
spacerpg Posted January 9, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 9, 2010 50 points seems abit little maybe change it to 100 . Good pictures and ok effects but they could have better names 8/10:) Fix'd your first complaint. I actually like the names, so I ain't changin' those XD. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
spacerpg Posted January 9, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 9, 2010 Bump! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scyire Posted January 9, 2010 Report Share Posted January 9, 2010 OCG is pretty good, the effects are a little op'd and I like the pics. 4/5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
spacerpg Posted January 9, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 9, 2010 Alright i thought they would be better as spell cards but that is my opinion 7/10 1st one 8/10 2nd one This was fun. I made some cards. Also' date=' these are the first cards where I made my own images! Cool, eh?[img']http://img41.imageshack.us/img41/5863/284598a.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted January 9, 2010 Report Share Posted January 9, 2010 1st card seems OP, because the major part of the cards in the hand are monsters.Maybe change the 150 to 300, it will fix it IMO2nd seems OP too, change the 1000 to 80it will fix IMOPics are good, OCG is off IMOAnyway i like those effects, good creativity9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hunterman988 Posted January 10, 2010 Report Share Posted January 10, 2010 The pictures freak me out. :shock:Well, OCG errors have been fixed so now its 8/10 I guess. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShinyBlade Posted January 10, 2010 Report Share Posted January 10, 2010 nice cards OCG a bit 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
spacerpg Posted January 10, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 10, 2010 Bump. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
spacerpg Posted January 10, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 10, 2010 Teh Bumpz. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 14, 2010 Report Share Posted January 14, 2010 change Magic to Spell ocg a little off, but it's nothing TOO big, just use the OCG thread 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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