Guest Cursed Reaction Posted January 9, 2010 Report Share Posted January 9, 2010 [spoiler=Telekinetic Portal-Opener][spoiler=Lore]You may discard a card from your hand to treat one of your empty spell and trap card zones as a monster zone. If you activate this effect, you may not enter your Battle Phase this turn. Remove from play up to 2 cards in your hand to search for up to two more copies of "Telekinetic Portal-Opener" from your deck and add them to your hand. [spoiler=Telekinetic Blast Soldier][spoiler=Lore]This card cannot be summoned except by removing from play three "Telekinetic Portal-Opener"s from your side of the field. This card's ATK and DEF is equal to the amount of monster zones on the field X 250. Decrease this card's ATK by 800 to add a "Telekinetic Portal-Opener" removed from play to your hand. During each of your End Phases, select a monster in your opponent's Graveyard. During your Standby Phase, if there is a Psychic-type monster removed from play, pay 200 Life Points for each card in your hand. You may discard 3 cards from your hand to draw cards equal to the amount of occupied monster zones on your side of the field. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rusty Shovel Posted January 9, 2010 Report Share Posted January 9, 2010 5/10. OCG is ok, Pics are ok, Effects are bland. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 14, 2010 Report Share Posted January 14, 2010 atk determining effect looks just fine the way it is 2nd card's effect a little dull, add another effect to it 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Cursed Reaction Posted January 14, 2010 Report Share Posted January 14, 2010 I've updated my second card's effect. Please check the OCG because I'm not sure how the effect should go. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 14, 2010 Report Share Posted January 14, 2010 change "amount of monster zones on your side of the field that have a monster in them" to "occupied monster zones", since by then we'll know what you're talking about by then Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Cursed Reaction Posted January 15, 2010 Report Share Posted January 15, 2010 Fixed OCG. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 15, 2010 Report Share Posted January 15, 2010 all right, then now I'll raise my rate to 8.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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