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New Archetype, Hell Born! PLEASE RATE!


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Hey guys I'm new and I'd like to post some cards, please tell me whatcha think :D.

 

 

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1 Tuner + 1 non tuner

Once per turn by Paying 800 Life points you may special summon 1 Hell Born creature Level 4 or below from the graveyard to the field (the card you special summon may not be used as a Synchro, fusion summon Or tribute summon). During the end phase the monster gets removed from play.

 

 

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1 Or More Hell Born Tuner(s) + 2 Or More Non tuner Hell born monster(s).

Add this monsters attack by 1000 for each monster used to Synchro summon it (max 5). This card can attack as many times as for the monster cards used to Synchro summon it.

 

 

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This card cannot be normal summoned or set. This card cannot be special summoned except by the effect of the ritual spell card “Death's call.” You must also tribute monsters who's levels equal 10. No hell born creature Can be destroyed by the effect of spell cards, trap cards and monster effects that specifically designate a Hell Born. This card gains 300 ATK for all the levels used to summon this card (Max 12).

 

 

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This card is used to Ritual summon "Hell Born Reaper". You must also offer monsters who's level equals 10 or more from your field or hand.

 

 

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When this card is face up on the field, the player owning this card, once per turn may Synchro summon 1 card from their graveyard as well as the field. That card gets removed from play during the end phase it was summoned. you may only have 1 Synchro monster summoned from the graveyard at a time.

 

 

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When Hell Born Minion is Normal summoned you may special summon another "Hell Born Minion" from your hand.

 

 

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1 Tuner + 1 Non Tuner(s).

When this card is face up on the field any monster cards in both graveyards may not be removed from play under any conditions.

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1 Tuner + 1 non tuner

Once per turn by Paying 800 Life Points you may Special Summon 1 Hell Born creature Level 4 or below from the graveyard to the field (the card you Special Summon may not be used as a Synchro, Fusion Summon Or Tribute Summon). During the End Phase the monster gets removed from play.

 

The rest is fine

8/10

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1 Tuner + 1 non tuner

Once per turn by Paying 800 Life Points you may Special Summon 1 Hell Born creature Level 4 or below from the graveyard to the field (the card you Special Summon may not be used as a Synchro' date=' [b']Fusion Summon Or Tribute Summon[/b]). During the End Phase the monster gets removed from play.

Thanks, when I don't feel so lazy I'll edit it.


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You remind me of when I made my first set and they were archetypes *tear*...

 

First of all your simple Effects is very playable and I think you got your effects by looking at cards before making your own cards which is genius. Your OCG is a tad off but it's better than other New Members in my opinon. I would love to see more Hell Born monsters.

 

8/10

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You remind me of when I made my first set and they were archetypes *tear*...

 

First of all your simple Effects is very playable and I think you got your effects by looking at cards before making your own cards which is genius. Your OCG is a tad off but it's better than other New Members in my opinon. I would love to see more Hell Born monsters.

 

8/10

 

<3. Thank you everyone :D. Also AzN the funny thing is I'm probably younger then 95% of the forum lol.

 

Ok I'll make more.. come tomorrow after noon, good night everyone!

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Card 1

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1 Tuner + 1 non tuner

Once per turn by Paying 800 Life Points you may Special Summon 1 creature Level 4 or below from the graveyard to the field with "Hell Born" in its name. (the card you Special Summon may not be used as a Synchro, Fusion Summon Or Tribute Summon). During the End Phase the Monster gets removed from play.

 

Card 3

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This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of the Ritual Spell Card “Death's call.” You must also Tribute monsters who's levels are equal 10. No Hell Born creature can be destroyed by the effect of Spell Cards, Trap Cards and monster effects that specifically designate a Hell Born. This card gains 300 ATK for all the levels used to Summon this card (Max 12).

 

Card 2

OCG Fix

1 Or More Hell Born Tuner(s) + 2 Or More Non tuner Hell born monster(s).

Add this monsters attack by 1000 for each monster used to Synchro Summon it (max 5). This card can attack as many times as for the Monster Cards used to Synchro Summon it.

 

Card 4

OCG Fix

This card is used to Ritual Summon "Hell Born Reaper". You must also offer monsters who's level are equals 10 or more from your field or hand.

 

Card 5

OCG Fix

When this card is face up on the field, the player owning this card, once per turn may Synchro Summon 1 card from their Graveyard as well as the field. That card gets removed from play during the End Phase it was Summoned. you may only have 1 Synchro Monster Summoned from the Graveyard at a time.

 

Card 6

OCG Fix

When Hell Born Minion is Normal Summoned you may Special Summon another "Hell Born Minion" from your hand.

 

Card 7

OCG Fix

1 Tuner + 1 Non Tuner(s).

When this card is face up on the field any Monster Cards in both Graveyards may not be removed from play under any conditions.

 

 

You need to work on your card grammer

use this to help you

http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-167644.html

And the effects are to bland

 

5/10

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