.Lost Posted January 10, 2010 Report Share Posted January 10, 2010 http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2010/009/5/3/Raves_are_fun_by_Siddiqiau00.png Yeah, i really like this one It was fun making it :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
koramore Posted January 10, 2010 Report Share Posted January 10, 2010 Pretty K00l I like it. I like the colors. Text could use some work though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Shore Posted January 10, 2010 Report Share Posted January 10, 2010 <3 the crops. On the bigger one I couldn't really figure out what the focal was. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted January 10, 2010 Report Share Posted January 10, 2010 I think I'm in love. LP is so fawking sexy. Text seems to shrunken on the horiz one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Lost Posted January 10, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 10, 2010 thanks guys, and yeah, the cropping was kinda hard to figure out xD but i got it Btw, theres something wrong with this tag. Something maybe someone will notice... i see a +rep to the person who gets it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted January 10, 2010 Report Share Posted January 10, 2010 Ze lighting is wrong on the right side. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Night Posted January 10, 2010 Report Share Posted January 10, 2010 Looks great, but like they said Text Looks bad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flexh Posted January 10, 2010 Report Share Posted January 10, 2010 very cool pic 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted January 10, 2010 Report Share Posted January 10, 2010 very cool pic 10/10 Don't rate in Showcase and it isn't a pic, it's a tag, so please GTFO, you obviously have no idea what you're talking about. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azmodius Posted January 10, 2010 Report Share Posted January 10, 2010 I like this to a great degree. V2 is mah favorite. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
'tyleR Posted January 10, 2010 Report Share Posted January 10, 2010 Everybody's better than me now. D: I love it, yo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Lost Posted January 10, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 10, 2010 Ze lighting is wrong on the right side. Yeah' date=' i know D: But imo it would look unbalanced without the blue, amirite Looks great, but like they said Text Looks bad. Text makes it trippy, hahah thanks tho very cool pic 10/10 Even though you shouldn't be rating in showcase (you really shouldnt) i still appriciate it. thanks Everybody's better than me now. D: I love it' date=' yo.[/quote'] Your still prtetty good, yo. havent seen one of your works in a while tho Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted January 10, 2010 Report Share Posted January 10, 2010 Ze lighting is wrong on the right side. Yeah' date=' i know D: But imo it would look unbalanced without the blue, amirite[/quote'] I said right, not left xD And that wasn't the thing you wanted us to spot? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Energy Posted January 10, 2010 Report Share Posted January 10, 2010 Really nice dude you seriously got some talent. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Lost Posted January 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 11, 2010 Ze lighting is wrong on the right side. Yeah' date=' i know D: But imo it would look unbalanced without the blue, amirite[/quote'] I said right, not left xD And that wasn't the thing you wanted us to spot? Oh, my bad. And nah xD Just take a look at some of the flow and you may get it in time Really nice dude you seriously got some talent. thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted January 11, 2010 Report Share Posted January 11, 2010 I see it. Some of the rings/C4D's/whatever are going in opposite directions. I think. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kizzi Posted January 11, 2010 Report Share Posted January 11, 2010 I see it. Some of the rings/C4D's/whatever are going in opposite directions. I think. I think he straight-up mirrored them. ._. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
'tyleR Posted January 11, 2010 Report Share Posted January 11, 2010 Where in the hell do you find those stocks/renders? D:< I haven't made any tags/LPs/works in a while. I'm actually trying to practice drawing/sketching and painting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Lost Posted January 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 11, 2010 I see it. Some of the rings/C4D's/whatever are going in opposite directions. I think. Nope. Aight' date=' what i did wrong is that the lightings and glow sticks and basically everything except the text are blurred from left to right, the text is up and down, yeah? messed up I see it. Some of the rings/C4D's/whatever are going in opposite directions. I think. I think he straight-up mirrored them. ._. ? Where in the hell do you find those stocks/renders? D:< I haven't made any tags/LPs/works in a while. I'm actually trying to practice drawing/sketching and painting. Fringefx And if your practicing drawing/sketching/painting, your actually ahead of me in the long run because as soon as you hit inter drawings/sketches/paintings should be your best friends Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chairman ali Posted January 11, 2010 Report Share Posted January 11, 2010 This needs a lot of work tbh.Lighting for starters. You have a lot of exposer effects which make it look cluttered. It seems that the light is coming from everywhere. You need a slick transition. Also you forgot to change the right side of the clothes colour. Since you have green glowing on the right, you will need to recolour his right side to the same level of green. Also you will have to add a thicker glow to the effcts. You can do that with soft brushing and gaussian blur. Also remove the text because it throws the whole thing off. Concept is not bad. But execution is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShootingTheMoon Posted January 12, 2010 Report Share Posted January 12, 2010 No. Just no. Add take out the double letters and add a shadow instead. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuro no Keiyakushu Posted January 12, 2010 Report Share Posted January 12, 2010 No. Just no. Add take out the double letters and add a shadow instead. LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL. LOLOLOL. LOL. lol. LOLOLOLOLOL.LOLOL.LOL. Yeah... LOLOL. LOLOLOLOL. lol? lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chairman ali Posted January 12, 2010 Report Share Posted January 12, 2010 No. Just no. Add take out the double letters and add a shadow instead. Gtfo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShootingTheMoon Posted January 12, 2010 Report Share Posted January 12, 2010 Its called comstructive critisism. Live with it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuro no Keiyakushu Posted January 12, 2010 Report Share Posted January 12, 2010 Its called comstructive critisism. Live with it. Shall I laugh at your stupidity again? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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